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Precious Rose

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Mike
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0 posted 05-26-2000 06:40 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mike

O' precious Rose, I see thy face aglow,
At eventide, when I in dream retire,
Upon my soul, thy tenderness bestow,
As touched upon, by depth of thy desire.
Fair Rose, dear creature of my night's rejoice,
When I upon thee gaze, mine heart doth quiver,
In sweet anticipation of thy voice,
A satin bloom, unto me deliver,
Aglaea, sweet Grace of Splendor sent,
As meadows washed in rain, untrodden snow,
A joy unblemished, thy love transcendent,
From forth thy lips, as honeyed mead doth flow.
Thou art Calliope, goddess of night,
Thy beauty fair, outshines the welkin light.

[This message has been edited by Mike (edited 05-26-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Mike - All Rights Reserved
vandana
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1 posted 05-26-2000 06:46 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Enjoyed your poem very much!!!!!!
Martie
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2 posted 05-26-2000 09:49 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Mike, the beauty of your words to rose is enough to make the moon blush.
Poet deVine
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3 posted 05-26-2000 09:50 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Mikespeare! I mean Mike! This is perfect..lovely..beautiful..magical..perfect.. Did I tell you I like it?  
doreen peri
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4 posted 05-26-2000 10:50 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

wow wow wow wow and yet again wow

you are one kinda poetmaster, m'friend... damn! can you weave the words, or what?

geez... i'm impressed
Rose Petal
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5 posted 05-27-2000 12:03 AM       View Profile for Rose Petal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rose Petal

How many times am I in awe of you, how many words can express the emotion I feel from your poetry, A thousand words cannot compare thee, to the beauty, the love, felt from thy hand of romantic poetry!!!!
Rosebud1229
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6 posted 05-27-2000 12:09 AM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

when I upon thee gaze mine heart doth quiver,
so many beautiful words, Mike you are a true romantic, hope to read more of your poems. Nice to meet you.

 



[This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (edited 05-27-2000).]
Meadowmuse
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7 posted 05-27-2000 12:15 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Stirring meditation, my friend...

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Mike
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8 posted 05-27-2000 08:04 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Vandana... thank you very much.  Hope things are going well in India.
Martie...  and just what kind of moon are we talking about blushing here...  OMG! sorry... hehe  seriously, thank you for the gracious comment.
Ms. deVine...  been called a lot of things, first time for that...lol  appreciate your comment.  You are way too kind.
Doreen... trying to make me blush are you.. er... I guess Martie did that. I am awaiting another of your rambles by the way.
Rosebud and Rose Petal...  now what is it about your names that I like so much.  Thank you both ever so much for the wonderful comments.
Claire...  *smile*
Nan
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9 posted 05-27-2000 09:17 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

How about "MikeMeister"????....
Kit McCallum
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10 posted 05-27-2000 09:35 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Your romanticism and style flow with such passion and grace Mike ... a truly wonderful verse!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Lily121
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11 posted 05-27-2000 11:00 AM       View Profile for Lily121   Email Lily121   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lily121

Nice old english...can you teeach me it?
Lily121
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Nice old english...can you teach me it?
poetFemmeFatale
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13 posted 05-27-2000 12:02 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

How funny, and kinda spooky!  As I was reading this, I too, was thinking it sounded so Shakespeare, and then I nearly died when PdV said the same thing!  hehehe  Very cool!  I do love your poems of love sir...they flow so beautifully!  I'm glad to see you back posting btw...missed your verse to say the least!
Mike
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14 posted 05-28-2000 01:19 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Nan... Mikemeister?  is that some exotic kind of Kansas beer?  
Kit, a very gracious comment.  Thank you. Lily... thank ya kindly...   as far as Olde English... I speak English and I'm old... that is about as good I can do... *smile*  glad you enjoyed.
Femme...  I am like a bad penny... keep turning up...  better than throwing up I guess.. ack...    anytways... thanks for the comment.
 
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