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Salooma
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0 posted 05-26-2000 03:31 PM       View Profile for Salooma   Email Salooma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Salooma

Hi...I'm new in Open, but I got a suggestion a few months back to post this in herr....I hope you like it   Goodbye
Goodbye dear place I've come to know.
Goodbye youth of summer and snow.
Goodbye fears in hidden fury.
Goodbye seven years gone by in a hurry.
Goodbye all unsolved lies.
Goodbye all broken family ties.
Goodbye you old wicked winding road.
Goodbye every stroy never told.
Goodbye hatred, hurt, and pain.
Goodbye dreams never attained.
Goodbye my prison with four standing walls.
Goodbye life's rises and all it's falls.
Goodbye perplexity in all different forms.
Goodbye childish fears of thunderstorms.
Goodbye days with my lemonade stand.
Goodbye life with no demand.
Goodbye worries in a dusty haze.
Goodbye young struggle through a hamster's maze.
Goodbye each forgotten tear.
Goodbye problems that now seem mere.
Goodbye love's last command.
Goodbye things I could never understand.
Goodbye both friend and cowardly foe.
Goodbye each final Saturday show.
Goodbye blue demon finally unveiled.
Tomorrow is a new day to be shared

[This message has been edited by Ron (06-25-2011 10:02 AM).]

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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 05-26-2000 03:52 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

You've said your good-byes with conviction Salma.  Here's to looking forward to new beginnings and fresh tomorrows ... refreshing and positive poem, nicely done.

Best wishes,
/Kit
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2 posted 05-26-2000 10:39 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

More than a mere poetic swan song, this piece creates a lovely literary window toward a new beginning. Wonderful writing!

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


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3 posted 05-26-2000 11:19 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

love these lines...

"Goodbye worries in a dusty haze.
Goodbye young struggle through a hamster's maze."

thanks for posting this... it delves into the struggles we all deal with but rises through the surface to let the past lie and grow

enjoyed
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4 posted 05-27-2000 08:19 AM       View Profile for Salooma   Email Salooma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Salooma

Thanks a lot for the replys...I'm really glad you enjoyed it  

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5 posted 05-27-2000 08:24 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Salooma~
HELLO WORLD !
We welcome you to Open ...
~*Marge*~


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