Cute, no seriously I enjoyed this.
The rhyming makes it sound like a twisted children's song and adds an edge to it. Interesting and enjoyable, after that poem I would not trust you with any sharp objects.
"Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "
"Here chewing your tail is joy"
"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".
[This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 05-26-2000).]