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LngJhnAg
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0 posted 05-26-2000 01:37 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for LngJhnAg

In the passing of the night,
I feel your fingertips, so light
As they trace their message there,
Across my brow, through my hair.

I know you love me, I can read your touch.

Your fingers whisper your loving thoughts,
I cherish what your touch has brought,
Peace and joy, in equal measure
Loving moments, searing pleasure.

I know you love me, I can hear your touch.

I barely breathe as your fingers trace,
My furrowed brow, my weathered face.
And with each worried etch they mark,
The line eases, then departs.

I know you love me, I can feel your touch.

"Sleep well, my love," you whisper near,
As I succumb to your touches dear.
Your feathery kiss alights on my lips,
As you sing to me with fingertips.

I know you love me, its in your touch.
© Copyright 2000 Michael Waterman - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 05-26-2000 01:53 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

LngJhnAg,
I didn't know you were so touchy? Nice one enjoyed the read.
Kit McCallum
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2 posted 05-26-2000 02:11 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

You words wove lovely images of braille upon the body ... beautifully written LngJhnAg!

Best wishes,
/Kit
LngJhnAg
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3 posted 05-26-2000 02:20 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Sy

You found me out - but I thought you sensed that after the passionate kisses you received from 'Deer and me.  lol - thanks for the comment.

Kit - thanks for those words of encouragement.
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4 posted 05-26-2000 02:31 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LongJohn~
This is absolutely stunning !
How breathtakingly lovely.

Good to know you're 'touched'.
(that's what Balladeer always said
about you)
~*Marge*~


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LngJhnAg
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5 posted 05-26-2000 02:34 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Marge - thanks for your comments - I love your poem about your old house
CocoBaci
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6 posted 05-26-2000 02:49 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Exquisite verses written here thank you for such a pleasant reading  
Coco
LngJhnAg
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7 posted 05-26-2000 02:52 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

well, ladies - all I can say about touch is that men may seem to be unaware of the soft touches (gotta be tough, yanno), but as for me (and I suspect most other men), I am aware of even the slightest touch from a woman.  You may have no idea what soft touches can do to a mean old man such as myself.  Lorelei is a master at the art of soft touches and caresses - I truly love being her canvas as she creates one masterpiece after another.
Lorelei54
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8 posted 05-26-2000 03:29 PM       View Profile for Lorelei54   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorelei54

Your poetry is to me dear Mike, what my touch is to you...we dance a perfect dance within our marriage and I am at peace..ily
Salooma
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9 posted 05-26-2000 03:34 PM       View Profile for Salooma   Email Salooma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Salooma

Wow....that's so sweet  
It's a really nice poem to have written for your wife.

Salma

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10 posted 05-26-2000 04:19 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, well, well....Home is the sailor - home from the sea. It's about time!!!! Great to see you, LongJohn! I know there have been things we have disagreed on in the past but in this case we are in complete accord. Lorelei does indeed have one of the greatest touches in the world!!!

You just can't imagine how good it is to see you two. Now if we can just dig up Toe from that ditch he's hiding in, we can rouse a rabble or two.....
Nan
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11 posted 05-26-2000 05:07 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Perhaps our newbies would appreciate a view of that special touch....
LOVE YA BOTH
Elizabeth Santos
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12 posted 05-26-2000 05:14 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Oh, this is all so beautiful! I'm in tears. It's wonderful to see you two again, And Lngjohn, your poem does not surprise me, for when you first meet Lorelei, you feel her warmth from across the room. She is very loving in many ways, and you two are so precious. Thanks for the lovely picture Nan, a picture of love
Love yas
Liz
Oh, what am I doing? I got so sidetracked I forgot to say
An exquisite poem, dear friend
Liz


[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 05-26-2000).]
JamesMichael
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13 posted 05-26-2000 05:24 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Such a soft and tender message...and touch.  James
Martie
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14 posted 05-26-2000 06:33 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

What a tender, loving and of course fingertouching delightful poem!
Pepper
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Well, my friend ... I'm melting here ... You and Lorelei are the picture of love ... it radiates to all that have the pleasure of seeing you together ... as I have ...
Lovely, lovely poem .....
netswan
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16 posted 05-26-2000 09:40 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Hi Lngjhn - what a wonderful poem!

I was expecting a Lorelei siren song -)
but this was lovely.

My sister's name is Lorelei -)

~netswan
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17 posted 05-26-2000 09:48 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I just want to repeat what everyone else has told you..this is beautiful...and the two of you are wonderful together...  
doreen peri
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18 posted 05-26-2000 11:49 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

truly heartfelt, passionate, caring, tender, enrapturing verse

you both are so very blessed

i don't think i've ever read such a special, succinct and loving poem from you, longjohn... i'm very impressed! thank you for posting this and showing us this special kind of tribute a man can give his wife
Nan
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19 posted 05-27-2000 09:58 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Hey Mike - Did I mention that I like your poem???...
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You've shared your special love here in such masterful poetic fashion...words delivering grace to the heart. It is a treat to actually "see"  the two of you together!

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Lorelei54
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21 posted 05-27-2000 12:12 PM       View Profile for Lorelei54   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorelei54

Thank You everyone...LJA and I send our love to you...and appericate the sweet words that reaffirm our love
 
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