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~Blinded By Your Beauty~

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Sudhir Iyer
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since 04-26-2000
Posts 7206
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium


25 posted 05-30-2000 05:13 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Should I repeat the same word over and over again, but waht can I do, except describe in one word: BRILLIANT!!!!

Well, I change with times, this time I say,
!!!!!TRULY MANGNIFICENT!!!!!

Regards, sudhir

 Hey you, out there in the cold,
Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me?
Hey you, standing in the aisle,
With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me?
Hey you, don't help them to bury the light.
Don't give in without a fight.
Hey you, out there on your own,
Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me?
Hey you, with your ear against the wall,
Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me?
Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone?
Open your heart, I'm coming home....

by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall
Janet Marie
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since 01-22-2000
Posts 18986


26 posted 05-30-2000 07:41 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

THANK YOU friends for always understanding and encouraging my
little "emotional outbursts put to rhyme"
the replies on this have been amazing.
this place is amazing, because of the poets who "live" here.
me loves ya all
jm


 There are places inside our souls ...
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts ...
that need to be loved this much.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

jeffbrowning
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since 05-25-2000
Posts 7
Mobile, AL, USA


27 posted 05-30-2000 09:44 AM       View Profile for jeffbrowning   Email jeffbrowning   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jeffbrowning

Talk about being in touch.  So complete. So real.  This sounds like an excerpt from the diary of a persons heart.  Thank you for sharing.

"Whose place to criticize,
Or place into a mold
That which comes from the soul"
CocoBaci
Member Elite
since 05-06-2000
Posts 3084


28 posted 06-09-2000 12:43 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Janet, I missed this first time round and now I peruse thru poetry abound and this one you've shared a time ago I must extend to you my compliments..It's sweet
Coco  
Alle'cram
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since 02-28-2000
Posts 1827
Texas


29 posted 06-09-2000 01:08 AM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

Wonderful-Awesome-Powerful-Heartfelt

Loved beyond ordinary
Left in distress
Memorialized forever
EagleOne
Member Elite
since 03-07-2000
Posts 2858
Between a laugh and a tear...


30 posted 06-09-2000 03:35 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Janet..Wow, I almost missed this one. Such powerful emotions and feelings that can only come from the heart of someone who has been deeply touched by another. Great work as always!

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 03-06-2000
Posts 3768
Michigan


31 posted 06-09-2000 07:49 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

EagleOne, thank you for pulling this one up...how could I have missed this!!!

J.M.*****OOOOHHHHH MMMMMYYYYYY  
This is.......geesh I don't even
have the words to tell  you...but
you KNOW that I KNOW.  

"I never saw it coming ... never saw you walking right out from under me.

its about wanting somebody so much that you completely lose your mind.

There is still so much of you left here inside of me ...
every place you touched me left a mark ... made a memory.

I guess I thought if I held you close enough ... it would quiet all the doubt.
and I know that from this point on ...

there will always be a little part of you in everything I do.

I won't ask how....I just want to
tell you that I'm in awe of your work
and at the depth in which you capture
every feeling so acutely.  
**Angel Wing Hugs** for this little
beauty!! And why do I call it a Beauty...
because cleansing your heart and soul
of pain through writing can only be
BEAUTIFUL....Love you for this S.S.


lorilockheart
Member
since 05-06-2000
Posts 206
Alabama


32 posted 06-09-2000 08:08 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

Even now ... I'm still sitting here completely in awe of you ...
and I know that from this point on ...
there will always be a little part of you in everything I do.

J. Marie, Sis, I'm crying!  And still completely amazed at how close these experiences are to mine, and how much you write my own heart.  I love you! That's all I can say.
Lori


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I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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