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Haiku Sunrise - Sunset

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Marge Tindal
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Haiku Sunrise - Sunset
~*Marge Tindal*~

Cascading with light
Sun rays on curtain of morn
Drawn by rising day

Shadow of cloud drifts
Lazily across yon sun
Kissing day with cool

Wind blows into day
Billows us to tomorrow
Dismiss glow of sun

Night falls - I catch it
Moon glows on window of night
Casting soft shadow





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Honeybee
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1 posted 05-26-2000 07:50 AM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

Wow!  Yet again you amaze me with your talent!  Excellent haiku, beautiful imagery and thoughts, I just love haikus and senryus, please write more.  And finally I get to be the first to reply to one of your pieces, nah nah nah nah LOL  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
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Superb Marge(y)



I tired Haiku's once...and thought - yep, I REALLY am just a freeverse girl...

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Lovely, Marge! I'm there.

Corinne
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4 posted 05-26-2000 09:40 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, Marge! You do these so well!

Denise
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Marge, you've shown me
From light and dark, colors blend
A palette of dreams.

Nice work, Marge
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What a wonderfully depictive circle you've drawn from dawn to dusk Marge ... very picturesque and soothing! Lovely work!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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yuh i love the catching of the night line woowoo
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8 posted 05-26-2000 02:15 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

A beautiful desciption of our days and nights, Marge. I really enjoyed it!

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
Marge Tindal
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Melissa~
Thanks so much for your apprecition of Haiku.
'Tis a pleasure to be able to share them with you.

Kamla~
Come on ... just one ????

Corrine~
Thanks, hon ... I see you.

Denise~
Thank you - they like me.

LongJohn~
Thanks, guy !  LOVED your reply.
So good to see you surface !

Kit~
I'm so pleased that you find it pleasing.

Walt~
*HUGS* and thanks ... my favorite line too.

LoveBug~
Thank you, sweetie.  I know you enjoy these.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 05-26-2000 02:29 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

lovely hiaku Marge,

Cascading with light
Sun rays on curtain of morn
Drawn by rising day
Shadow of cloud drifts
beautiful.




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"Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "
Douglas Adams.

"Here chewing your tail is joy"

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"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

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Ah yes.......
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Marge~
     I love it when you do these!  Such a beautiful way to express feelings, I think.  And you can say so much in such a small space!  I love this, dear!

Love Ya~

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
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Beautiful poem!!!!!!!
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Simply beautiful , Marge ... Through your eyes, I always see such beauty .....
(Hugs)
Marge Tindal
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BrianM~
Thank you.  
I just love the simplicity of Haiku.

Sunshine~
Ah, thanks !

TerryW~
Hi ya' darlin'.
If you love them .. then I shall
just have to do more of them.
MY TREAT as I love them so.

VanDana~
Lovely reply.

Pepper~
And, through your hugs
I always feel friendship !
Love ya'
~*Marge*~





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge what can I say except I think you're a great all rounder  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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17 posted 05-27-2000 07:13 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

A beautiful Haiku, excellently captured the sunrise & sunset. Brava!  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


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Tracie~
You're such a sweetheart for thinking so.
Thanks, little one.

DarkAngel~
I'm so pleased to know that you enjoyed it.
I do ... like Haiku !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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19 posted 05-28-2000 09:58 AM       View Profile for Kellsue   Email Kellsue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kellsue

Beautiful Haiku Marge!  I love it!!

~Kelly


 ~Kellsue

Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens

We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill

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lovely attempt..enjoyed this one lots
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