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Haiku Sunrise - Sunset
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Haiku Sunrise - Sunset |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Haiku Sunrise - Sunset ~*Marge Tindal*~ Cascading with light Sun rays on curtain of morn Drawn by rising day Shadow of cloud drifts Lazily across yon sun Kissing day with cool Wind blows into day Billows us to tomorrow Dismiss glow of sun Night falls - I catch it Moon glows on window of night Casting soft shadow ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow! Yet again you amaze me with your talent! Excellent haiku, beautiful imagery and thoughts, I just love haikus and senryus, please write more. And finally I get to be the first to reply to one of your pieces, nah nah nah nah LOL  Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Superb Marge(y)  I tired Haiku's once...and thought - yep, I REALLY am just a freeverse girl... K |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely, Marge! I'm there. Corinne |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Marge! You do these so well! Denise |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Marge, you've shown me From light and dark, colors blend A palette of dreams. Nice work, Marge |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderfully depictive circle you've drawn from dawn to dusk Marge ... very picturesque and soothing! Lovely work! Best wishes, /Kit |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
yuh i love the catching of the night line woowoo |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
A beautiful desciption of our days and nights, Marge. I really enjoyed it! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Thanks so much for your apprecition of Haiku. 'Tis a pleasure to be able to share them with you. Kamla~ Come on ... just one ???? Corrine~ Thanks, hon ... I see you. Denise~ Thank you - they like me. LongJohn~ Thanks, guy ! LOVED your reply. So good to see you surface ! Kit~ I'm so pleased that you find it pleasing. Walt~ *HUGS* and thanks ... my favorite line too. LoveBug~ Thank you, sweetie. I know you enjoy these. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
lovely hiaku Marge, Cascading with light Sun rays on curtain of morn Drawn by rising day Shadow of cloud drifts beautiful. ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah yes....... |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marge~ I love it when you do these! Such a beautiful way to express feelings, I think. And you can say so much in such a small space! I love this, dear! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Beautiful poem!!!!!!! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Simply beautiful , Marge ... Through your eyes, I always see such beauty ..... (Hugs) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BrianM~ Thank you. I just love the simplicity of Haiku. Sunshine~ Ah, thanks ! TerryW~ Hi ya' darlin'. If you love them .. then I shall just have to do more of them. MY TREAT as I love them so. VanDana~ Lovely reply. Pepper~ And, through your hugs I always feel friendship ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge what can I say except I think you're a great all rounder Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A beautiful Haiku, excellently captured the sunrise & sunset. Brava! Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ You're such a sweetheart for thinking so. Thanks, little one. DarkAngel~ I'm so pleased to know that you enjoyed it. I do ... like Haiku ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Beautiful Haiku Marge! I love it!! ~Kelly  ~Kellsue Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
lovely attempt..enjoyed this one lots |
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