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FadingSun
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0 posted 2000-05-26 04:22 AM


"Special"


A special moment in time
Love without reason or rhyme
A meeting of fate's design
Destiny our two hearts did find

A special touch of the heart
Two souls never to part
Together in eternal bliss
Created from one eve's kiss

A special song that's played
Everytime another memory's made
Feelings growing deeper inside
Promising we've nothing to hide

A special Forever we share
Together, we'll ever be
But Together & Forever are nothing
Without you and me


 In the sight of Love, fear isn't even as great as a single hair: in the law of Love, everything is offered as a sacrifice

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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-05-26 05:52 AM


Very sweet and romantically touching FadingSun ... lovely work!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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2 posted 2000-05-26 07:30 AM


FadingSun~
Very special feelings in your thoughts.
Enjoyed.
~*Marge*~


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FadingSun
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3 posted 2000-05-27 12:13 PM


Kit,

Thank you always for your kind words.

Marge,

And thank you, too.  I always honor your thoughts.


 In the sight of Love, fear isn't even as great as a single hair: in the law of Love, everything is offered as a sacrifice

CocoBaci
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4 posted 2000-05-27 03:51 AM


.. But together & forever is nothing w/o you and me ..
This verse just grasped my heart .. Truly a sweet poem you share with us.
  
Coco


[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 05-27-2000).]

tracie66
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5 posted 2000-05-27 04:54 AM


S~
Very special and touching poem, I do hope you have shown her  
Tracie~
Thanks for the e


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



FadingSun
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6 posted 2000-05-28 08:22 PM


Coco, thank you ! =)

Tracie,
You know how I appreciate your insight. And yes I have shown her =).  Thanks again Tracie!


 In the sight of Love, fear isn't even as great as a single hair: in the law of Love, everything is offered as a sacrifice

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