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Irie
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0 posted 05-26-2000 02:51 AM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Irie

Yet another dear friend has moved away
And I think of her most every day
Her old house at times I drive by
I find myself sometimes stopping to say Hi

Then I remember its no longer her place
I drive away with a smile on my face
Thinking of how it used to be
And how shes still a good friend to me

Oh how I wish she were still here
Though she will never move back I fear
Shes happy now at her new abode
Down at the end of that long country road

Im happy for her as a friend should be
And someday soon her new place Ill go see
But until that day I want her to know
That Im thinking of her and miss her so


Dedicated to Deb

(Note to self: If I could learn how to spell I could quit editing my messages) LOL  



~Sheri

[This message has been edited by Irie (edited 05-26-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Sheri - All Rights Reserved
netswan
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1 posted 05-26-2000 04:00 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

LOL Irie!   Beautiful poem. If I could
learn to stop being in such a hurry
I wouldn't have to edit anything. hehe

Wonderful touching tribute to your friend!

~netswan
Kit McCallum
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2 posted 05-26-2000 05:55 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Wonderful Irie ... I've just moved myself, and it's so odd to think of someone else in the place we "used to call home".  Lovely poem, and best wishes to you and your friend.

/Kit
aleisha
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3 posted 05-26-2000 06:33 PM       View Profile for aleisha   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for aleisha

Very good Irie. I hope Deb reads it. Good job again my best friend!
SpitFire
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4 posted 05-26-2000 09:28 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Oh Irie,..send this to her,..she'll cherish it.  Such a nicely written sentiment.  *Take care.
Irie
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5 posted 05-29-2000 02:30 AM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

Netswan...
     Just another one of my problems. Always in a hurry!  

Kit...
     Very odd thing isn't it. Strange to see someone else there.

Aleisha...
      She has read it my best friend!  

SpitFire...
      Ditto above.  

Thank you all for your nice replies!  
I'm glad you enjoyed!


 ~Sheri
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6 posted 05-29-2000 02:35 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Hey Sheri,
          this is very good. . . a wonderful tribute to your friend. . . we should all have someone that close to us. . .

Excellent my friend. . .

And don't worry, I won't tell them about your spelling if you won't!!!  

-------------------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

shilpi
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7 posted 05-29-2000 05:10 AM       View Profile for shilpi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for shilpi


I hope you see your friend very soon, not to renew your friendship but to enhance it !!

Your feelings were expressed very well, by the time i reached the last line, I felt like one my friends was leaving !!

shilpi
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