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Such Love

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spiked
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0 posted 05-26-2000 02:20 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for spiked

Such love
Few have seen
For when strong
The rivers flowed
And when weak
You can hear it creak.

Real love
Is true
I am
Are you?

No song
Sings so well
No tune so blue.


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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 05-26-2000 02:22 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

loves got its peaks in valleys thaz why they say yuh fal in love hehehe o i kill me and your poem i do like it tells well
netswan
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2 posted 05-26-2000 02:26 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Lovely, Spike.  Enjoyed

~netswan
spiked
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3 posted 05-26-2000 07:32 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Thank you wayoutwalt and netswan.
serenity blaze
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4 posted 05-26-2000 07:38 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Simply put--but oh so strong---and what a presentation----tried to hold off and couldn't resist...much serene applause....
and much love to you as well....
shilpi
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5 posted 05-26-2000 08:04 AM       View Profile for shilpi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for shilpi

Thats true love alright !! wonderful work...
shilpi
Corinne
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6 posted 05-26-2000 09:54 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

lovely, spiked!

Corinne
Kit McCallum
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7 posted 05-26-2000 02:47 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Beautifully said Spiked ...

Best wishes,
/Kit
brian madden
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8 posted 05-26-2000 03:20 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

lovely poem spiked.

No song
Sings so well
No tune so blue.

well when I start singing in tune,
and acting without thinking like a fool
I will now it is true love I have found,
it is to bliss I will be bound.

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Douglas Adams.

"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto


Salooma
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9 posted 05-26-2000 03:39 PM       View Profile for Salooma   Email Salooma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Salooma

Wow...beautiful poem that speaks of true love in only a few words. Very nice  

Salma

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vandana
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10 posted 05-26-2000 06:51 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

I loved it!!!!!!!
 
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