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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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0 posted 2000-05-26 02:19 AM


     YES
(think i had something
few people ever really get...)
Real Love
(think that it's
my way through...)
no matter who I'm with--
it'll be that way,
because, if it's not,
I would move on...
When I love,
I love strong.
When I hate,
it's worse than hate...
     Serenity...
fine line--
   the center
of which is
  PASSION.

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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2000-05-26 02:21 AM


ying and yang in the middle is kaboom i like this lots!
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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2 posted 2000-05-26 04:24 AM


My gosh Walt, You understood this IMMEDIATELY---gotta love ya for that....
making me smile more everyday..Thanks.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-05-26 08:11 AM


Real Love
(think that it's
my way through...)
no matter who I'm with--
it'll be that way,
because, if it's not,
I would move on...
When I love,
I love strong.
When I hate,
it's worse than hate...
-------------

and when i hurt, i bleed,
when he leaves i need.
when i ache, i die
when he lies, i cry...
(you get the picture)
bleeding out me eyes is me specialty.
*sigh*...
oh me twin...how i relate to this one...
why do we love SO hard everytime...
and I wonder why me muse is off licking wounds and not speaking to me.
me muse is smarter than me
you know...I know...we know...
misery loves company me sweet...sit by me
me loves ya
jm

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