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David2
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since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

0 posted 2000-05-26 12:18 PM

Fingertips

The memory of beauty lingers long
Though absence wields a telling, trying blow
And portraits of the mind once rich and strong
Must alter as the face of drifting snow.
So too your face dissolves into a haze
As so it must lest madness seize domain
And force this soul to suffer endless days
Of recollections full of haunted pain.
But triumph overcomes such tragedy
As your return is met with grateful cries
Relieved of long and dreadful misery
As flawless beauty soothes these tired eyes

For truly you were granted beauty blessed
When God's own fingertips your soul caressed.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2000-05-26 12:32 PM

WOW! my favorite lines..For truly you were granted beauty blessed
When God's own fingertips your soul caressed.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-05-26 12:40 PM

But triumph overcomes such tragedy
As your return is met with grateful cries
Relieved of long and dreadful misery
As flawless beauty soothes these tired eyes

For truly you were granted beauty blessed
When God's own fingertips your soul caressed.

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your just way too good at this *smile*
amazing emotions and vocabulary in this one D.
perfection.
very very nice read

jm

Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

3 posted 2000-05-27 09:09 AM

"as flawless beauty soothes these tired eyes".This so beautiful and romantic. I really enjoyed reading this and it touched my heart. Ellie

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Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-05-28 11:38 PM

Very beautiful, David! I love it!

Denise

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