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David2
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0 posted 05-26-2000 12:18 AM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for David2

Fingertips

The memory of beauty lingers long
Though absence wields a telling, trying blow
And portraits of the mind once rich and strong
Must alter as the face of drifting snow.
So too your face dissolves into a haze
As so it must lest madness seize domain
And force this soul to suffer endless days
Of recollections full of haunted pain.
But triumph overcomes such tragedy
As your return is met with grateful cries
Relieved of long and dreadful misery
As flawless beauty soothes these tired eyes

For truly you were granted beauty blessed
When God's own fingertips your soul caressed.

© Copyright 2000 David William La Belle - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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WOW! my favorite lines..For truly you were granted beauty blessed
When God's own fingertips your soul caressed.
Janet Marie
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2 posted 05-26-2000 12:40 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

But triumph overcomes such tragedy
As your return is met with grateful cries
Relieved of long and dreadful misery
As flawless beauty soothes these tired eyes

For truly you were granted beauty blessed
When God's own fingertips your soul caressed.

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your just way too good at this *smile*
amazing emotions and vocabulary in this one D.
perfection.
very very nice read  
jm

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


ellie LeJeune
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3 posted 05-27-2000 09:09 AM       View Profile for ellie LeJeune   Email ellie LeJeune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ellie LeJeune

"as flawless beauty soothes these tired eyes".This so beautiful and romantic. I really enjoyed reading this and it touched my heart.  Ellie

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4 posted 05-28-2000 11:38 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful, David! I love it!

Denise
 
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