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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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On the brink... Yeah? Really? On the brink of what? Self discovery? (A snicker) Madness (A giggle) Yeah... Definetely madness you said.. (Laughed so hard I cried) Then the headache came and took me over (A groan and shaking head) You asked what was wrong I threw up my hands And asked what was right. (Sigh) I don't understand you. Thats what you said. (Rolled my eyes then) You said you weren't a mind reader. (I frowned) After two years Shouldn't your guitar strings Be somewhat in tune with my mind now? (I walked away) (You finally began to finger the right cords) I thought it was too late then (sigh) I guess women never really can be satisfied. (You glared at me) Then said... When I read your mind I'm assuming too much and overstepping boudaries When I don't read it, I'm an insenstive dope with no clue. Finally I know what a man is. (I grinned) (You rolled your eyes) Marriage. What an odd arrangement. (We forgave each other our stupidity) Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
 I LOVE IT (sigh) Temptress, this is great! (smiling). I'm left speachless (come on idiot, think of something) Oh...um....sorry...Yeah, that's it, I had so much fun reading this. (oh, that was a good one.....dork) I even read it a few times I liked it so much!  (can't come up with anything better than that? Sheeesh) How much fun this was! (have to read again) Well Done Temptress  (smiling) [This message has been edited by Irie (edited 05-26-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i could see this in my own marriage well down tempty |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
LOL!  Thank you, Irie. I am so glad you enjoyed it. I've had this tone to my writing for about a month now. I don't know why it comes out this way, but I'm glad somone is liking it. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Walt. Hi there. Thanks for reading and relating. Now will you do me a favor?? AUTHORIZE Mississippi Peach!! Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
k i did im assuming your talkin bout icq |
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