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Temptress
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0 posted 05-25-2000 11:57 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Temptress

On the brink...
Yeah?
Really? On the brink of what?
Self discovery?
(A snicker)
Madness
(A giggle)
Yeah...
Definetely madness you said..
(Laughed so hard I cried)
Then the headache came and took me over
(A groan and shaking head)
You asked what was wrong
I threw up my hands
And asked what was right.
(Sigh)
I don't understand you.
Thats what you said.
(Rolled my eyes then)
You said you weren't a mind reader.
(I frowned)
After two years
Shouldn't your guitar strings
Be somewhat in tune with my mind now?
(I walked away)
(You finally began to finger the right cords)
I thought it was too late then
(sigh)
I guess women never really can be satisfied.
(You glared at me)
Then said...
When I read your mind
I'm assuming too much and overstepping boudaries
When I don't read it,
I'm an insenstive dope with no clue.
Finally I know what a man is.
(I grinned)
(You rolled your eyes)
Marriage.
What an odd arrangement.
(We forgave each other our stupidity)



 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"


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Irie
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Posts 1526
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1 posted 05-26-2000 12:35 AM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

   I LOVE IT  
(sigh)
Temptress, this is great!
(smiling).
I'm left speachless
(come on idiot, think of something)
Oh...um....sorry...Yeah, that's it, I had so much fun
reading this.
(oh, that was a good one.....dork)
I even read it a few times I liked it so much!    
(can't come up with anything better than that? Sheeesh)
How much fun this was!
(have to read again)
Well Done Temptress    
(smiling)




[This message has been edited by Irie (edited 05-26-2000).]
wayoutwalt
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2 posted 05-26-2000 12:42 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

i could see this in my own marriage well down tempty
Temptress
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3 posted 05-26-2000 12:42 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

LOL!   Thank you, Irie.   I am so glad you enjoyed it.   I've had this tone to my writing for about a month now. I don't know why it comes out this way, but I'm glad somone is liking it.  

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"


Temptress
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4 posted 05-26-2000 12:55 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Walt.
Hi there. Thanks for reading and relating. Now will you do me a favor?? AUTHORIZE Mississippi Peach!!


 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"


wayoutwalt
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5 posted 05-26-2000 01:05 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

k i did im assuming your talkin bout icq
 
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