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kat
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since 2000-05-20
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0 posted 2000-05-25 08:14 PM


Seducing you

Look at me the way you do
Touch me like no other
Hold me in your arms
Then take it a little further

Are you thinking what I’m thinking
Can you feel what I want to do
Can you read my body language
Are my eyes focused on you

I want to loose my inhibitions
And melt within your arms
Clenching to you with desire
Loose myself in all your charms

Tell me what you’d like from me
I’ll make your fantasies come true
Taking you to complete ecstasy
Is what I’m going to do



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netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
1 posted 2000-05-25 08:45 PM


Wow, Kat another goodie poem up your sleeve!

"I want to lose my inhibitions
And melt within your arms
Clenching to you with desire
Lose myself in all your charms"

Lovely and achingly sweet.

~netswan

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
2 posted 2000-05-25 08:57 PM


Wow, well written and seductive! You go girl! LOL  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

kat
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since 2000-05-20
Posts 387

3 posted 2000-05-25 11:05 PM


Thanks for the beautiful responses!  

Kat

MysticalNights
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since 2000-05-17
Posts 112
Oklahoma
4 posted 2000-05-25 11:55 PM


OHH! LA! LA!  You must be quite the suductress yourself to write such a piece..
insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

5 posted 2000-05-26 01:30 AM


I don't think you'll get your way
No is just one word I will say
Please don't try I'll tell you why
My will is strong and I'm shy

Now you got me thinking the same
Get your hand off there! SHAME!!
NO! PLEASE! Don't squeeze!
NO! DON'T
NO! PLEASE!
OH NO!
Please!
YES! YES!

kat
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since 2000-05-20
Posts 387

6 posted 2000-05-26 11:25 AM


MysticalNights, yes I can be quite the seductress but it depends with who.  

Insect I love your poetic remark to it..lol. Didn't stay shy for too long did you?..lol.

Kat

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
7 posted 2000-05-26 11:31 AM


Wonderful passionate verse Kat ... nicely written!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Dakota
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since 2000-05-25
Posts 125
New York
8 posted 2000-05-27 03:41 AM


Join me there in ecstacy
This is so much more than fantasy
For in my soul, my hearts afire
You are my one desire

Come to me, lets make haste
For there is no time to waste
Our souls together are perfectly matched
From this union,it has hatched

A light brighter than the sun
For you theres me, and for me you are the one

kat
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since 2000-05-20
Posts 387

9 posted 2000-05-27 08:43 AM


Kit:  Thank-you

Dakota
You've left me breathless with desire
You don't know what you've done to me
You've really set my soul afire
You put your words so beautifully

Kat


Dakota
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since 2000-05-25
Posts 125
New York
10 posted 2014-11-14 09:16 PM


Life has a very strange sense.
Putting up such a fence.
The fire burns deep inside.
Bursting forth, it cannot hide.

Longing deeper than the ocean.
So much love and devotion.
If fate flicks its fickle finger.
Our souls apart will not have to linger.

Together we shall be, body and soul.
Blissful eternity our only goal!

Dakota
Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 125
New York
11 posted 2014-11-14 09:16 PM


Life has a very strange sense.
Putting up such a fence.
The fire burns deep inside.
Bursting forth, it cannot hide.

Longing deeper than the ocean.
So much love and devotion.
If fate flicks its fickle finger.
Our souls apart will not have to linger.

Together we shall be, body and soul.
Blissful eternity our only goal!

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