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SpitFire
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0 posted 05-25-2000 07:24 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SpitFire

~Thank You~

Piece by piece you mended me,
piece by piece I grew.
Oh my little angel,...I wish you only knew.

What you have done to save me from,
the demons of my past.
Oh my little sweetness,...you gathered me so fast.

Took my broken heart and soul,
kissed them softly with your caring.
Oh how can I thank you for the heart you have been sharing.

Your smile is that of a thousand hugs,
your eyes the light of a storm.
Oh to express what you mean to me,...words I just cannot form.

It is you my dear that makes each day,
a treasure in itself.
In you I've found every penny,...that constitutes life's wealth.

~Thank You~

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1 posted 05-25-2000 09:05 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

SpitFire~
What lovely thoughts.
Made me smile.
Thanks for sharing.
~*Marge*~


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netswan
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2 posted 05-25-2000 09:08 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Oh Spitfire! How sweetly lovely --
beautiful poem - loved the ending!

~netswan
Lone Wolf
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3 posted 05-25-2000 09:50 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

SpitFire,

Such Passionate writing, my friend.  The end was just perfect!!  

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
insect
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4 posted 05-25-2000 11:16 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

NO! …. Thank YOU!
WoW!!
I loved that line…your eyes the light of a storm
I can just picture looking into someone's eyes and
seeing light flashes. You know when you're looking
deep into their eyes.
See ya at the top
Janet Marie
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5 posted 05-26-2000 01:11 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Took my broken heart and soul,
kissed them softly with your caring.
Oh how can I thank you for the heart you have been sharing.

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wow what a HEARFELT thank you
wonderful writing here..very touching
take care, jm

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Irie
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6 posted 05-26-2000 01:18 AM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

Spitfire,
     This is lovely, and perectly expressed!
Keep up the good work!  


 ~Sheri
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7 posted 05-26-2000 03:33 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

You have found the words I have been searching for, and crafted them so well. Excellent work!

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


bad girl
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8 posted 05-26-2000 07:14 AM       View Profile for bad girl   Email bad girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bad girl

I can definately relate to this poem...it is very well written. Good job!

Bad Girl
SpitFire
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9 posted 05-26-2000 04:21 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Wow,...what can I say?...You guys are great.

~Marge,...glad I could make you smile with my writing as it's usually on the sadder side.  Thanks for reading...means lots.

~Netswan,...thank you, thank you for reading and for such kind words of compliment.

~LW,...oh thank you for taking the time, and for the perfect,...wow.

~Insect,...you're too cool.  hehe.  Thanks for liking,...and sending me up.

~Janet Marie,...thank you so so much, you kind person you.

~Irie,...thank you for reading and for the encouragement. Really,...thanks.

~EagleOne,...well thank you sir for the excellent.  

~Bad Girl,...so glad you can relate to having someone so great in your life,..but not the demons of the past part .  Anyway,...thanks for reading.

*Peace.
Kit McCallum
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10 posted 05-26-2000 04:30 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

I absolutely adored this SpitFire ... you are surely not lacking for the right words ... well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit
brian madden
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11 posted 05-26-2000 04:39 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

it is amazing the power that a person's words can have when geniune, how they can heal and comfort. A beautiful poem.

It is you my dear that makes each day,
a treasure in itself.
In you I've found every penny,...that constitutes life's wealth.

A fantastic piece of wisdom.

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"Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "
Douglas Adams.

"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto


Lorraine Nisbet
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12 posted 05-26-2000 06:33 PM       View Profile for Lorraine Nisbet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lorraine Nisbet


Spitfire,

Absolutely lovely.

~Lorraine
tracie66
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13 posted 05-27-2000 10:11 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Little spitfire~
This made my heart warm as I read it as I know you really need someone like this in your life. What a wonderful way to express your thanks to this person and I do wish you every happiness in life.
Keep it up this was very heartfelt to read  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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