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*Papa*

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SpitFire
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*Papa*

Papa can you hear me?
Papa are you there?
A thousand miles away...
could you possibly still care?

Papa do you still know me?
Papa are you there?
A thousand miles away...
how can this seem fair?

Papa do you want to?
Papa are you there?
A thousand miles away...
do you wish that you were here?

Papa do you miss me?
Papa are you there?
A thousand miles away...
I'm sending you my tear.

Papa can you feel it?
Papa are you there?
A thousand miles away...
I'm your child,...holding on so dear.


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This is full of sadness and longing. Very well done, SpitFire!

Denise
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Touching and full of emotion Spitfire ... heartwrenchingly well done.

Best wishes,
/Kit
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