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Together forever

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Angel`Fox
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0 posted 05-25-2000 10:38 AM       View Profile for Angel`Fox   Email Angel`Fox   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Angel`Fox's Home Page   View IP for Angel`Fox

Together forever

I feel the love rushing into me
Swelling my heart
What you give me is pure
What I give you is myself
Wrap me up in your love
Forever and ever
I want to take my last breath
With your lips on mine
Press together forever
My life started
The day I meet you
My heart never felts this way before
You take my breath away
Your word swims in my soul
Your touch soft as a petal
Your embrace oh so strong
Was this ment to be?
Did our souls finally meet?
It was ment to be, you and me
It is our destiny
Lets start our life together
Forever.



 @}>*+~^ Angel`Fox ^~+*<{@

{~._.~}
_( Y )_
()~*~()
(_)-(_)

"Love seeketh not itself to please
Nor for itself hath any care,
But for another gives its ease,
And builds a heaven in hell's despair"

© Copyright 2000 Julie Charlebois - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 05-25-2000 11:48 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful, Angel Fox!  

Denise
Kit McCallum
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2 posted 05-25-2000 11:54 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

"I want to take my last breath
With your lips on mine"

(loved that line)  Such romance and promise of new love ... nicely done AngelFox!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London


3 posted 05-25-2000 11:56 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

very nice ... and I wish you all the best

Rex
Angel`Fox
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4 posted 05-25-2000 04:18 PM       View Profile for Angel`Fox   Email Angel`Fox   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Angel`Fox's Home Page   View IP for Angel`Fox

awww thank you all   Nothing beats the feeling of Love!!

 @}>*+~^ Angel`Fox ^~+*<{@

{~._.~}
_( Y )_
()~*~()
(_)-(_)

"Love seeketh not itself to please
Nor for itself hath any care,
But for another gives its ease,
And builds a heaven in hell's despair"

 
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