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My True Love

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kat
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0 posted 05-25-2000 07:31 AM       View Profile for kat   Email kat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for kat

Playful, witty
How exciting how inviting
A mysterious romantic
All so new and enticing

Unprepared and unaware
For the feelings we will bare
Time and time again
We meet, so much to share

Strong yet fragile
Kind and true
Minutes then hours
Iím enthralled by you

Deepest secrets get revealed
Strong emotions kept concealed
Messages get longer
Feelings get stronger

Keeping them hidden
Some feelings are forbidden
Each other we have found
To others we are bound

Promises, broken
Words of love, spoken
Hearts connecting, wanting more
Feelings, emotions never felt before

True love, soul mates
No words to describe
Total release
Of our feelings inside

I love you completely
Perhaps life times before
And with each passing moment
I love you even more.

© Copyright 2000 kat - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 05-25-2000 07:46 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Oh, the forbidden love when bound to another ... you've shared your emotions well Kat, nicely done!

Best wishes,
/Kit
EagleOne
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2 posted 05-25-2000 08:35 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

You have captured the feelings so very well, well done!

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


Severn
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3 posted 05-25-2000 09:30 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

What a lovely piece...welcome to Passions Kat.

    

kat
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4 posted 05-25-2000 02:22 PM       View Profile for kat   Email kat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kat

Thanks so much guys.
I've only been here for a short time and I'm loving it.  Alot of the poems on this site are truly magical and very inspiring. Kat.
brian madden
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5 posted 05-25-2000 03:36 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

a beautiful poem kat, lovely.

Playful, witty
How exciting how inviting
A mysterious romantic
All so new and enticing
Unprepared and unaware
For the feelings we will bare
Time and time again
We meet, so much to share

Strong yet fragile
Kind and true
Minutes then hours
Iím enthralled by you




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MysticalNights
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6 posted 05-25-2000 11:43 PM       View Profile for MysticalNights   Email MysticalNights   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MysticalNights

Beautiful poem kat!  What an excellent way to express your feelings for, who must be, a very special person..  GREAT JOB!!
insect
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7 posted 05-26-2000 07:42 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

Very beautiful!  
kat
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8 posted 05-27-2000 12:43 AM       View Profile for kat   Email kat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kat

It's great to share this poem with you and thanks for all the beautiful compliments.

Kat
Dakota
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9 posted 05-27-2000 03:20 AM       View Profile for Dakota   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dakota

A very lovely poem indeed!
I'll take it from your lead.
A luckier man could not be found.
Than whom you've described so profound!

Very nice Kat, I look forward to seeing more of your work.
CocoBaci
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10 posted 05-27-2000 03:26 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

So sweeeeeeet these verses you write.  It's amazing how feelings and emotions put to pencil or ink just seem to flow so eloquently.
Coco
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