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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
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0 posted 2000-05-25 06:44 AM


As I think
Of Time so fleet,
It brings excitement
And Defeat.
It's scenes so soon
Are replaced,
Another day
Another face.

Who can stop
The momentum,
My head e'er whirls
With each, "Go get'em!"
Can't we stop
And Pause a while?
Take time to Laugh--
Enjoy a Smile.

Time will pass
No matter what,
So make the Most
Of what you've got!
For some there's less
Than we might deem,
So use to fullness--
Don't just dream.

© Copyright 2000 David L. White - All Rights Reserved
ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-05-25 06:53 AM


You are right, David....we are on the same wavelength today! Your poem is great...I really enjoyed it!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-05-25 06:54 AM


David~
And another thought that reminds us
as Lil' Lizzie says to
'Make Time To Take Time' ...

Enjoyed your thoughts ...
I shall slowly savor this day.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

3 posted 2000-05-25 10:39 AM


lovely deleeme  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)



Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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4 posted 2000-05-25 11:51 AM


Wise words, David! Thanks for the reminder!  

Denise

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
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5 posted 2000-05-25 11:56 AM


This was sweetly perfect David ... a wonderful reminder of time too fleeting. I enjoyed this!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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