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Make Time To Take Time
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Make Time To Take Time |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Make Time To Take Time Time waits for no one here, As morning comes the night is near. Running, racing to keep up with life, Got to keep moving to avoid the strife. Don't stop to smell the roses, Don't pause to hear birds sing. Come on, do hurry up, Or you'll be late for everything! . I'm reminded how short a life can be, Is it really worth the haste? There just has to be more to living, All this hurry ... such a waste. Instead of going full-speed ahead, Slow down to take nature's wonders in. Watch flowers bloom and insects flutter, To ignore such glory is a sin. Take time to watch a sunset, Notice the beauty all about you. And when next you feel the need to hurry, Don't chase time, make it wait for you! Make time to take time Linger in the garden of content. Wishing on rainbow arches before the time is spent. ------------------------- Thanks Marge for helping me polish this!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lil' Lizzie~ What beautiful phrases to greet me on the dawn. I will 'make time to take time' and watch a flower glow. You simply 'glow' with such wisdom. Glad to share with you ... you're awesome. I love you, Lil' Lizzie ... my friend. BEAUTIFULLY DONE ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
ESP - this poem is beautiful - so wise, so smooth. I enjoyed reading it. ~netswan |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW Lizzie this is my last read for the night  I'm sure glad I made the time to take the time to read this before signing off  So sweet Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
It must be ESP- it seems we are one the same wavelength here--and this is some very sound advice-I am in full agreement.Lovely poem, David |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thanks for the replies, all! Marge-I love sharing with you!! Netswan-Thank you for enjoying it! Tracie-Thanks for making time for my humble poem. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
David, you snuck in while I wasn't looking! Well, thanks for reading and for the sweet reply you left me. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Good advice, stopping to watch the sunset is definately worthwhile. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh this is beautiful ESP, yes I agree we should all Make Time To Take Time! Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful, Lizzie! Beautifully woven words of wisdom! Denise |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lizzie ... this was perfectly lovely! As a little reminder to me on hectic days, my screensaver at the office constantly quotes WH Davies first lines of his poem Leisure "What is life if, full of care, We have no time to stand and stare?" Your poem was wonderful ... I may start quoting YOU now! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
very good message here ... just been told I have to slow down or could have a heart attack ... so I'll stop to smell the roses and feed the birds Rex |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I am so glad you guys like it!!! That makes me feel sooo good!!! Thanks for taking the time to read and reply to this!! I love you all! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Crystal Lynn Junior Member
since 2000-05-21
Posts 18Miami, FL. USA |
great poem Lizzie...truly makes ya wanna stop n watch the grass grow :] crystal |
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bad girl New Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 6 |
I was very moved by this poem....it speaks so much of the truth. Beautiful job!!  Bad Girl |
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