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~Judgement~

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tracie66
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0 posted 05-25-2000 06:06 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

You don't know me, You don't know who I am
I shall not be judged by you even though I can

In my heart and soul I know who I am and you cannot change that
You may think you can but the hat I wear is MY hat

I am not perfect none of us are
You sit and judge me from afar

I won't be hurt or put off by what you say
As I live to tell this tale for another day




 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe




[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 05-25-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
netswan
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1 posted 05-25-2000 06:12 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Wonderful, Tracie  - You go girl,
wear that hat --)  Great poem.

~netswan

[This message has been edited by netswan (edited 05-25-2000).]
tracie66
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2 posted 05-25-2000 06:26 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Thanks netswan I know it's short and not much at all but I had to let that out  

Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


ESP
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3 posted 05-25-2000 06:59 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Yeah Tracie!!! That's the spirit! I think your poem is great....short and says it all!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
Kit McCallum
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4 posted 05-25-2000 07:27 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Short and sweet, and well said Tracie. I've wanted to say this a few times myself ... thanks for putting it into words!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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5 posted 05-25-2000 07:48 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tracie~
Hon .. whatever prompted it ..
way to vent !
I love ya', hon !
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~


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SpitFire
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6 posted 05-25-2000 09:03 AM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Tracie,...glad to see your work again.  Seems like it's been a while since you posted.  This is a great piece!!!  Strong words,...good for you. *Take care.
Dark Angel
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7 posted 05-25-2000 09:18 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

So much said in so few words. Very well said Tracie. *hugs*  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


Rex Allen McCoy
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8 posted 05-25-2000 12:24 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

beautifully said tracie ...
from birth we start to develope individuality and for many it takes years of patience to learn to express our individuality ... lets not let anyone or anything spoil that

Rex
FadingSun
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9 posted 05-26-2000 03:59 AM       View Profile for FadingSun   Email FadingSun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for FadingSun

Tracie,

Your words are always so powerful, and continuously a treasure to hear (read) :0)
I don't believe there's a soul in this forum, that has not once desired to release that particular frustration... and besides... I like your hat!  

Always,
~S
bad girl
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Short and Sweet!  Very good job!

Bad Girl
tracie66
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11 posted 05-27-2000 05:08 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

To all my friends at passions
I'm so greatful for your comments but have come to the conclusion that this poem is a little too powerful and please I only hope that you can see that this was written because of something very hurtful that was said to me and I vented what I was feeling at the time through this poem.
Thanks again
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


 
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