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netswan
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0 posted 05-25-2000 05:28 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Daffodils


Soft plush daffodils
vibrant in sun color
waving gaily happily

fragrant and tantalizing
amidst grassy hills
brightly shining aglow

scintillating colorful orbs
thirstily drinking raindrops
proudly standing strong

against mountain backgrounds
daffodils hail triumphantly
splashing sunny gold

~netswan




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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 05-25-2000 05:55 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Lovely and picturesque Netswan .. I've been away for a few days so I haven't seen the challenge ... it appears to be no letter "e"???  That's a tough one! You met it beautifully!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Corazon
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2 posted 05-25-2000 09:33 AM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

yep, this is a b*autiful pictur* you paint*d....lol I don't think I am quit* up to the chall*ng*...  
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3 posted 05-25-2000 09:40 AM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Netswan,...you're brilliant!!!  This is lovely. *Peace.
Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 05-25-2000 10:29 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

All you 'E's move away, netswan has made you all history....  

Great work, netswan, right up there where you belong to the top...

Regards, sudhir.

 Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.
netswan
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5 posted 05-25-2000 03:45 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Kit - thank you - Kaile's Challenge is
any Poem - just no e's in it.  It was fun.
I am glad to have you - Thanks

Corazon, it was a lot easier than I thought
it would be, so get crackin' on one. Thanks

Spitfire - think I am going to make you
one of my favorite fans -- you are so bright and cheerful in your responses  

Sudhir - thank you - I appreciate your comments
brian madden
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6 posted 05-25-2000 04:05 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

wow netswan every second word I seem to type has an e in it. SEE. It is quite difficult for me not to speak a sentence without the letter e in it.  . Well done, not only to meet a difficult challenge but you wrote a beautiful poem as well,

fragrant and tantalizing
amidst grassy hills
brightly shining aglow

scintillating colorful orbs
thirstily drinking raindrops
proudly standing strong

fantastic.

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Douglas Adams.

"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto


Janet Marie
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7 posted 05-26-2000 01:05 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

beautiful poem Swan and I can tell you had fun with this challenge as well.
wonderful colors and imagery in this.
take care, jm

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


wayoutwalt
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8 posted 05-26-2000 01:07 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

you did so well i wrote one bout noel
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