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I the Decider

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 05-25-2000 04:19 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel



Lead fills my heart
     dragging it down
                      to drown
and  I will
   for I began to drown
in your love....and now
             I see rock bottom
    coming closer

       I struggle for air
for strength to survive
          for with or without
      you,I may or may not
          but
            may's and might's
    just don't cut it

I am the decider
     of my happiness
  my sadness, my lonliness
          I will decide
   if I shall live
          or die
              so
        when I stop feeling
    I'll know I'm
        dead


Dark Angel
25/5/00
  



 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 05-25-2000 04:32 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

i always keep my eyes tightly shut under water cuz im a sissy but its good to be able to see the rocks keep those eyes wide open! good poem
Severn
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2 posted 05-25-2000 09:29 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I am sure that is a horrid place to feel yourself.

No one knows the future though.

Hugs hon - this is a good one.

K
Kit McCallum
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3 posted 05-25-2000 09:36 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Never stop feeling Dark Angel, for you portray your emotions so well. You showed such power in the ending ... well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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4 posted 05-25-2000 11:15 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

How I like this...you've written my creed here...and I didn't find this so dark...
(you might wanna start worrying NOW--grin)
but well done, Dark Angel...
kat
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5 posted 05-25-2000 11:27 AM       View Profile for kat   Email kat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kat

May's and might's don't cut it. You're right! but, at the sametime the futur is unknown.  No matter what, never get to the point where you stop feeling. Great poem!  
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6 posted 05-25-2000 12:10 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wonderful poem, Dark Angel. Sadness tempered with strength!

Denise
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7 posted 05-25-2000 06:31 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel



 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)




[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 05-25-2000).]
Dark Angel
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8 posted 05-25-2000 06:31 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Walt, Soul-Sis, Kit,Serenity, Kat and Denise
Thank you so much for your kind and much appreciated replies. *HUGS* to you all.


 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


Martie
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9 posted 05-25-2000 06:58 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Dark Angel--This is so strong and self determined, yet fragile and openly full of feeling...wonderfully done!
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10 posted 05-25-2000 08:54 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Excellent writing, angel. May you never stop feeling.......
Lone Wolf
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11 posted 05-25-2000 09:00 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Dark Angel,

What a strong poem.  You are right...only you can make you happy or sad...no one else can decide that for you.  Great words of wisdom.

LW


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--Michael W. Smith
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