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svtcobra
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since 05-23-2000
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Syracuse,NY USA


0 posted 05-25-2000 02:06 AM       View Profile for svtcobra   Email svtcobra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for svtcobra



Received the message you left
The voice I wanted to hear
Hanging on every word
Excited to see you tonight


Not going to be here much longer
Got out early
Wanting to know where I am
Hoping I'll go out for a drink


Message was left an hour ago
Cant call you
Got your number
But you live with him


Friends call
They want to go out
No longer in the mood
Just going to stay home

Maybe I'll see you tonight
In my sleep
You are always in my dreams
There we are together
© Copyright 2000 David J. Gassen - All Rights Reserved
mitymopr
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since 05-24-2000
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1 posted 05-25-2000 02:11 AM       View Profile for mitymopr   Email mitymopr   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mitymopr

hell yeah due, this almost beats 3 f'ing thirty
netswan
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since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
Washington


2 posted 05-25-2000 06:38 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

svt,

"Message was left an hour ago
Can't call you
Got your number
But you live with him"

This poem is tight with emotional pain.

~netswan
ESP
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since 01-25-2000
Posts 2574
Floating gently on a cloud....


3 posted 05-25-2000 07:38 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Whoa....this one is jam packed with emotional pain. Very well written.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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Kit McCallum
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4 posted 05-25-2000 07:42 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

So close and yet so far ... you've said it all Svtcobra ... well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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