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Music of My Heart

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Angelwings
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0 posted 05-25-2000 12:17 AM       View Profile for Angelwings   Email Angelwings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Angelwings


To reach out and feel you surrounding me
To feel my body enwrapped in you
Catching every last word
Holding it dearly to my heart
I strain to hear every sound
To feel every beat
To listen not with my ears but with my heart
To catch the meaning and understand
To take solitude in your meaning
The tone, the pitch, the sound
Ringing in my ears
Through my heart
And out of my mouth
Consoling my pain
Working through my anger
Taking away the loneliness
Taking away the tears
To reach out and feel you surrounding me
To feel my body enwrapped in you
Is truly my dream come true
© Copyright 2000 Chelsea Thompson - All Rights Reserved
netswan
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1 posted 05-25-2000 01:22 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Aw, how sweet, Angelwings - lovely
heartfelt poem

~netswan
SpitFire
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2 posted 05-25-2000 09:07 AM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Awww,...Angelwings this is perfect.  "To listen not with my ears but with my heart",...if you can do this, you've truly found it.  This is so sweet. *Peace.
Kit McCallum
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3 posted 05-25-2000 09:10 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

To be surrounded by such wondrous feelings Angelwings ... you are blessed. Lovely poem!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Meadowmuse
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4 posted 05-25-2000 09:15 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

There is little that I know of that is more satisfying than to feel this kind of connection with someone you love...wonderful sentiment you've expressed here, Angelwings...thank you.  

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Severn
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5 posted 05-25-2000 09:20 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Lovely...lovely...

Dark Angel
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6 posted 05-25-2000 10:35 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Very nice Angelwings   enjoyed the read.

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


2dalimit
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7 posted 05-25-2000 11:18 AM       View Profile for 2dalimit   Email 2dalimit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2dalimit

You said it all in one breath. Very nice.
Melton
Angelwings
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8 posted 05-25-2000 01:07 PM       View Profile for Angelwings   Email Angelwings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angelwings

Thank you everyone for reading my poem.  It can be doubled both as love and passion.  Thank you again and have a wonderful day of writing.  
 
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