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Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2000-05-24 11:15 PM


Have you ever felt alone?
With no one around
They all turn and walk away
Without making a sound
Have you ever wanted to just talk?
To vent away your day
They just never seen to listen
With each word that you say
Have you ever wanted a hug?
To feel the love inside
But they are too busy
For you to confide
Have you ever wanted to smile?
To laugh and not cry
But others are elsewhere
No matter how hard you try
Have you ever lost a friend?
That you miss in many ways
They would always make ya laugh
And brighten up your days
Have you ever felt badly?
For the things you say and do
The memories seem to stay
And your nights seem so blue
Have you ever doubted my frienship?
For this you should NOT do
Incase you start to fall
I shall pick you up too
I am here to make to make you laugh
And to give you that lil smile
To make you feel the caring
As we walk that extra mile


 I do not love you for being perfect.....
I love you for being perfect for me!!



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netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
1 posted 2000-05-25 01:57 AM


This is delightfully touching - and
nicely written.

Yes, haven't we all had those feelings
of hoping for some sharin' and carin'

Well done, Dark_kisses_Within

Beverly
Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 123
New Mexico
2 posted 2000-05-25 02:02 AM


The last line says a lot.  True friends do go that extra mile.  Nice read, Thanks!
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