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Confusion

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Cyndey
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0 posted 05-24-2000 09:53 PM       View Profile for Cyndey   Email Cyndey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Cyndey's Home Page   View IP for Cyndey

"Confusion"

Confusion
A vice
Tightening around my soul
So dumbfounded I feel
On how to deal with you.
Is it my fear of being hurt?
Or are we just not meant to be?
I do not want to feel
Used, Cheapened, Degraded,
Or taken for Granted.
Why do I sense this is
All your able to give?
I want so much more
Than what I believe
You are capable of.

Should I mar my soul
By allowing you in?
Or
Should I lock the Door
And shut you out?


© Copyright 2000 Cyndey - All Rights Reserved
Holly
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since 05-12-2000
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1 posted 05-24-2000 09:57 PM       View Profile for Holly   Email Holly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Holly's Home Page   View IP for Holly

Cyn-
OK GIRL, get out of my thoughts!!! LOL   Man, did you know what's running through my head about now or what??? I love this one...just creepy you are reading my mind again...haha.
love,
-Holly


 I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.
Michel de Montaigne
netswan
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since 03-28-2000
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2 posted 05-24-2000 10:04 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Cyndey,
NEVER settle for less in a relationship.
Is my answer to your sweet heartfelt poem.

~netswan
Cyndey
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3 posted 05-24-2000 10:05 PM       View Profile for Cyndey   Email Cyndey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Cyndey's Home Page   View IP for Cyndey

Well girl...
I guess that's what happens when We run around together as much as we do!  
Glad you got much out of it!
luv,
Cyn
Cyndey
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4 posted 05-24-2000 10:15 PM       View Profile for Cyndey   Email Cyndey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Cyndey's Home Page   View IP for Cyndey

thanks Netswan! advice well taken!  
Cyn
jwesley
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5 posted 05-24-2000 10:34 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

"..why do I feel this is all you're able to give"...my advice...run, now, like away.

Very nice piece. Gets right down to the meat and bones...and like NSwan said...if you're settling for less...kiss him goodbye as you boot him out the door. And that's male talk!

jwesley
 
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