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Ethan Halo
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0 posted 05-24-2000 09:27 PM       View Profile for Ethan Halo   Email Ethan Halo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Ethan Halo's Home Page   View IP for Ethan Halo

hope


At the end of the tunnel, there could be light.
First, i must want to open my eyes.
I see through you now; now i realize
there's more to life than choking down your lies.

There's a place out there where i can live my life.
You won't be there; that's a good thing, right?
You won't control me by causing me strife.
I feel better and empty all at the same time.

You hate me now, as always.
It's plain to see.
How'd you ever look me in the eye?
Why'd you lie to me?

with that perfect smile.
I'd have never known...
Now I see that
I must walk alone.

Maybe, it's just that I'm not trying.
You only get what you give...
I've got to stop the feel of dying,
and teach myself to live.


 We all got somethin' we need to atone for.
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netswan
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1 posted 05-24-2000 09:30 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Ethan, what talent you have.
This is a great read.

~netswan
Ethan Halo
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2 posted 05-24-2000 09:30 PM       View Profile for Ethan Halo   Email Ethan Halo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ethan Halo's Home Page   View IP for Ethan Halo

hey guys, this is actually an optimistic one. how about that?
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