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Rocketman
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0 posted 05-24-2000 03:55 PM       View Profile for Rocketman   Email Rocketman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rocketman


Oh you wiley woman
you shaper of words
You seek the setting sun and hold onto dreams
feel the warmth upon your skin
the soft touch of gentle breezes
the earth turns
it's wicked course stops for noone
time is the enemy of love
be joyful unto the Lord
sing Him songs of praise
this time is meant for reasons unknown
this time is meant for Love
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Corazon
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1 posted 05-24-2000 04:21 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

ok, I don't understand the wiley woman part...would like an explanation, but welcome anyway   don't mind my misunderstanding....keep writing  
jwesley
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2 posted 05-24-2000 04:31 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

"...oh you wiley woman, shaper of words". Now that is a description, isn't it?  Wonderful line. Nice piece.

Welcome.

jwesley

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netswan
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3 posted 05-24-2000 05:05 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Welcome to Passions Rocketman -

Loved the start of this - but I got lost
somewhere as to the meaning of the poem.
Do explain what you are relating to we
avid readers.

~netswan
brian madden
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4 posted 05-24-2000 05:17 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Very interesting read,great poem loved the images.

Oh you wiley woman
you shaper of words
You seek the setting sun and hold onto dreams
feel the warmth upon your skin
the soft touch of gentle breezes

the earth turns
it's wicked course stops for noone
time is the enemy of love

fantastic.



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"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto


Rocketman
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5 posted 05-25-2000 12:54 PM       View Profile for Rocketman   Email Rocketman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rocketman

Thank you all for responding to my work.  I do have a lot to learn and nothing like the opinions of others to guide and inspire ones passion.

Corazon -  The wiley woman, shaper of words part is my sarcastic, yet affectionate way of describing my love who was proding me to write about how I feel about her.  This was my response...all stemming from the "wiley woman" that jumped from my head to the page.  We never have enough time for the one's we love.  Thanks for reading and I look forward to your comments on other works of mine.
Poet deVine
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6 posted 05-25-2000 01:14 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I think I'm a wiley woman, shaper of words! Welcome to the family..please check your email for a special message. I look forward to reading more from you..  
 
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