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David2
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25 posted 05-26-2000 02:24 PM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

Shilpi,
   Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed your poem.
          David2
Kit McCallum
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26 posted 05-26-2000 02:37 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

So much said in so little words ... a great accomplishment Shilpi!  This was lovely ... welcome to Passions!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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27 posted 05-26-2000 03:08 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

shilpi

A terrific poem - on a lighter note, may I suggest you come back, not as a tear, but as one of those bottles of eyedrops they sell on TV with the cheesy adds about beachballs... that way you could lie around in her purse waiting for her to wake up from her semidrunken stupor with her mouth tasting like yesterday's discarded ashtray and the sweat of a strange man still reeking in the room as he slips out the door of the rundown hotel leaving her penniless and stuck with the hotel bill.  Just a suggestion... grin

Incidently - your poem was a terrific entry - welcome aboard and please treat my stuff as funloving

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shilpi
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28 posted 05-27-2000 12:15 PM       View Profile for shilpi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for shilpi


Kit , David2.....thanks lot !!
shilpi
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29 posted 05-27-2000 12:22 PM       View Profile for shilpi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for shilpi


hmmm.....a bottle of eyedrops...hey, why not, thats a gr8 idea...!!! but it'd be quite stuffy in that , don't you think ? anyway, LngJhnAg , thanks for the suggestion !!! lol !!

shilpi
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30 posted 05-27-2000 07:51 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

Great little poem!
Welcome to passions!
Dark Angel
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31 posted 05-27-2000 10:40 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WOW

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


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