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My golden minx

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 05-24-2000 12:31 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Leaving on a cruise sat. Last post for two weeks.

       My golden minx

Created genie of my night,
A phantom and a sphere of store.
A second sun, a second light.
A world within a world and more.

Tranquility and fantasy,
An angel fair without the strings,
Mobility and ecstasy.
My ID that does amazing things.

An illusion with golden hair.
She sates my moods the warm the cold.
A dream, the fairest of the fair,
There is no wish she would withhold.

I've lived with her an age in store.
My answer to this paradox.
She is to me all things and more.
And my personal goldilocks.

I granted me this golden minx,    
To true I drink, the rest are winks.

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Corazon
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1 posted 05-24-2000 01:34 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

loved this, what a *golden* picture you paint
  
oh...and have fun   a getaway cruise sounds perfect right about now...sighs and smiles

[This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 05-24-2000).]
brian madden
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2 posted 05-24-2000 01:37 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Wow, just read this twice. You got me thinking as to what this poem is about. I am guessing love, A bit sleepy and tired so excuse my slow brain. anyway a wonderful read. I love the images,

Created genie of my night,
A phantom and a sphere of store

Tranquility and fantasy,
An angel fair without the strings,
Mobility and ecstasy.
My ID that does amazing things.

I've lived with her an age in store.
My answer to this paradox.
She is to me all things and more.
And my personal goldilocks.



 ------------------------
"Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "
Douglas Adams.

Small Black Flowers That Grow In The Sky

"You have your very own number
They dress your cage in its nature
Once you roared now you just grunt lame
Pace around pathetic pound games

Wanna get out won't miss you sensaround
To carry your own dead to swing your tyre tricks
Wanna get out here you're bred dead quick
For the outside,
The small black flowers that grow in the sky

They drag sticks along your walls
Harvest your ovaries dead mothers crawl
Here comes warden, Christ, temple, elder
Environment not yours you see through it all

Wanna get out won't miss you sensaround
To carry your own dead to swing your tyre tricks
Wanna get out here you're bred dead quick
For the outside,
The small black flowers that grow in the sky

Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 05-24-2000 01:42 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

This one is nice work as ever from you Seymour...

Bon Voyage! Hope that when you come back, you come with a bag of poems to post...

Regards, Sudhir.

 Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.
RAM
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4 posted 05-24-2000 02:40 PM       View Profile for RAM   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RAM

wonderful post, Seymour.   have fun.
Janet Marie
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5 posted 05-24-2000 03:05 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Tranquility and fantasy,
An angel fair without the strings,
Mobility and ecstasy.
My ID that does amazing things.

An illusion with golden hair.
She sates my moods the warm the cold.
A dream, the fairest of the fair,
There is no wish she would withhold.
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*sigh* oh well...me hair is redish brunette. I tried. LOL j/k

hmmmm, much here to read between.
me thinks this illusion may indeed have "strings"...but we need somethings more than others...
excellent writing.

now what am I supose to do for 2 weeks with no Sy poems...hmmmm, me thinks me will have to do some archive digging.*smile*

HAVE A WONDERFUL,RELAXING TRIP.
and most of all...write write write...
heres to TROPICAL inspiration .
take care Sy gator,
come back safe to us,
jm

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6 posted 05-24-2000 09:38 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour~
How ADORBABLE .....

Here's *winking* at you, babe !

Bon Voyage
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Meadowmuse
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7 posted 05-24-2000 10:02 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

..."A second sun, a second light.
A world within a world and more."


Seymour, your work is enchanting as ever and I love it...

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 05-24-2000 10:45 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Carazon, Thank you and I'll be thinking of all of you.

Brian, This is mostly for oldies.

Sudhir, Thank you and I'll do my best.

Ram, Thank you and I'll try.

Janet, Redish brunette, that's close enough. *L*

Marge, Thank you doll and here is a wink back. *L*

Claire, What a wonderful comment. *L*
Balladeer
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9 posted 05-24-2000 11:11 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Sy, obviously you have mis-scheduled your cruise. I'm coming by next week! Cancel that cruise!!! (In case you don't take my advice, have a wonderful trip!!!)
Angel`Fox
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10 posted 05-25-2000 12:01 AM       View Profile for Angel`Fox   Email Angel`Fox   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Angel`Fox's Home Page   View IP for Angel`Fox

Have a wonderful time   lovely poem

 @}>*+~^ Angel`Fox ^~+*<{@

{~._.~}
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()~*~()
(_)-(_)

"Love seeketh not itself to please
Nor for itself hath any care,
But for another gives its ease,
And builds a heaven in hell's despair"

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 05-25-2000 08:31 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Balladeer,
My brother will let you in, the check is on the table. I'll miss ya.

Angel, Thanks for the wonderful, will try my best to enjoy. See you all when I get back.
Severn
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12 posted 05-25-2000 09:21 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I hope you had/have the best time!!!

hugs dear Sy.

K
Kit McCallum
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13 posted 05-25-2000 09:28 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Wonderful poem Seymour ... like a fantasy coming true ... lovely!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Elizabeth Santos
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14 posted 05-25-2000 09:40 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

May the phantom angel of your dreams
Be with you in what place God deems
May your golden angel be your muse
Though the iceburg fields of lifeís cold cruise
May she keep you safe and warm your heart
While your pleasure ships sail far apart
May you then return to peace once more
On the crystal sands of dreamerís shore

Beautiful poem
Liz
Denise
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15 posted 05-25-2000 11:44 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, very beautiful indeed, Sy! Have a fabulous trip and come back with plenty of poems!!  

Denise
Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 05-25-2000 10:24 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Severn, Thank you for the hugs. *L*

Kit, Thank you for the wonderful.

Elizabeth, I'm packing the crystal sands. Love Sy

Denise, Thank you sweet. *L*
 
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