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My golden minx
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My golden minx |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Leaving on a cruise sat. Last post for two weeks. My golden minx Created genie of my night, A phantom and a sphere of store. A second sun, a second light. A world within a world and more. Tranquility and fantasy, An angel fair without the strings, Mobility and ecstasy. My ID that does amazing things. An illusion with golden hair. She sates my moods the warm the cold. A dream, the fairest of the fair, There is no wish she would withhold. I've lived with her an age in store. My answer to this paradox. She is to me all things and more. And my personal goldilocks. I granted me this golden minx, To true I drink, the rest are winks. |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
loved this, what a *golden* picture you paint  oh...and have fun  a getaway cruise sounds perfect right about now...sighs and smiles[This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 05-24-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Wow, just read this twice. You got me thinking as to what this poem is about. I am guessing love, A bit sleepy and tired so excuse my slow brain. anyway a wonderful read. I love the images, Created genie of my night, A phantom and a sphere of store Tranquility and fantasy, An angel fair without the strings, Mobility and ecstasy. My ID that does amazing things. I've lived with her an age in store. My answer to this paradox. She is to me all things and more. And my personal goldilocks. ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. Small Black Flowers That Grow In The Sky "You have your very own number They dress your cage in its nature Once you roared now you just grunt lame Pace around pathetic pound games Wanna get out won't miss you sensaround To carry your own dead to swing your tyre tricks Wanna get out here you're bred dead quick For the outside, The small black flowers that grow in the sky They drag sticks along your walls Harvest your ovaries dead mothers crawl Here comes warden, Christ, temple, elder Environment not yours you see through it all Wanna get out won't miss you sensaround To carry your own dead to swing your tyre tricks Wanna get out here you're bred dead quick For the outside, The small black flowers that grow in the sky Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This one is nice work as ever from you Seymour... Bon Voyage! Hope that when you come back, you come with a bag of poems to post... Regards, Sudhir. Life is like a painting, That in an art gallery is left hanging, Though many come just to look at it, A very few actually come to enjoy it. |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
wonderful post, Seymour. have fun. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Tranquility and fantasy, An angel fair without the strings, Mobility and ecstasy. My ID that does amazing things. An illusion with golden hair. She sates my moods the warm the cold. A dream, the fairest of the fair, There is no wish she would withhold. -------------- *sigh* oh well...me hair is redish brunette. I tried. LOL j/khmmmm, much here to read between. me thinks this illusion may indeed have "strings"...but we need somethings more than others... excellent writing. now what am I supose to do for 2 weeks with no Sy poems...hmmmm, me thinks me will have to do some archive digging.*smile* HAVE A WONDERFUL,RELAXING TRIP. and most of all...write write write... heres to TROPICAL inspiration . take care Sy gator, come back safe to us, jm |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ How ADORBABLE ..... Here's *winking* at you, babe ! Bon Voyage ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
..."A second sun, a second light. A world within a world and more." Seymour, your work is enchanting as ever and I love it... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Carazon, Thank you and I'll be thinking of all of you. Brian, This is mostly for oldies. Sudhir, Thank you and I'll do my best. Ram, Thank you and I'll try. Janet, Redish brunette, that's close enough. *L* Marge, Thank you doll and here is a wink back. *L* Claire, What a wonderful comment. *L* |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, obviously you have mis-scheduled your cruise. I'm coming by next week! Cancel that cruise!!! (In case you don't take my advice, have a wonderful trip!!!) |
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Angel`Fox Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 32Ottawa, Ontario Canada |
Have a wonderful time lovely poem@}>*+~^ Angel`Fox ^~+*<{@ {~._.~} _( Y )_ ()~*~() (_)-(_) "Love seeketh not itself to please Nor for itself hath any care, But for another gives its ease, And builds a heaven in hell's despair" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, My brother will let you in, the check is on the table. I'll miss ya. Angel, Thanks for the wonderful, will try my best to enjoy. See you all when I get back. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I hope you had/have the best time!!! hugs dear Sy. K |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful poem Seymour ... like a fantasy coming true ... lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
May the phantom angel of your dreams Be with you in what place God deems May your golden angel be your muse Though the iceburg fields of life’s cold cruise May she keep you safe and warm your heart While your pleasure ships sail far apart May you then return to peace once more On the crystal sands of dreamer’s shore Beautiful poem Liz |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, very beautiful indeed, Sy! Have a fabulous trip and come back with plenty of poems!! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Severn, Thank you for the hugs. *L* Kit, Thank you for the wonderful. Elizabeth, I'm packing the crystal sands. Love Sy Denise, Thank you sweet. *L* |
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