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she took a lover

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Corazon
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0 posted 05-24-2000 10:54 AM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Corazon


to squeeze the loneliness
from her arms
to pretend it far
far away
she took a lover

tender kisses
whet passions
long hung out to dry
the fever
of sensuous caresses
burned away
the anger
the degradation
at the hand that matched
the ring on her own

she took a lover
to her breasts
suckling forth a love
that lived never before
eroticelectricity charged
encircled
within loving arms
disappointments disappear
and for moments
for hours
it was easy to not
think
to let slide
what should be
and what shouldn’t

she took a lover…

© Copyright 2000 zoe d. - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
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1 posted 05-24-2000 12:37 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

hey! sounds like a great idea! hehe

as always, well written  with excellent imagery and verbiage
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 05-24-2000 12:44 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Corazon, Almost like taking an asprin. Enjoyed the read. *L*
Corazon
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3 posted 05-24-2000 03:34 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

lets see, *weighing it out in her mind*...hmmm an asprin...or a lover....hmmmm
both relieve pain....one is much more pleasurable than the other...but much more trouble too....hmmmm this might take some thought *g*

thanks you two for the read....and the compliments  
netswan
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4 posted 05-24-2000 03:54 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Corozon - Wow!
Well - sometimes, in life these things
happen - better to be loved then to shrivel
up into bitterness.

Lovely Poem

~netswan
jwesley
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5 posted 05-24-2000 04:43 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

"within loving arms                         disappointments disappear                  and for moments                          
for hours                        
it was easy to not
think
to let slide
what should be
and what shouldn’t"

Ah, don't we all long for those moments to never end.  Wonderful read.  Have enjoyed most everything of yours I've read and think I have read most.

jwesley
CocoBaci
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6 posted 05-24-2000 05:06 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Cora, truly a great reading
The opening verse grapsed me..to squeeze the lonliness from her arms !!
Thanks for the sharing
Coco
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 05-24-2000 09:49 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Corazon~
Very, very enjoyable read.
~*Marge*~



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8 posted 05-25-2000 12:46 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

C,
Very good. The weird thing about sex is it's both pleasurable and abusive, slowly making you a shell if there's nothing involved but the heat (and moisture) of it. Well, goodnight!  

Mike
Corazon
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thanks marge  

b-yep, I know its a fine line, I don't think I have jumped over it enought to be a shell, yet, but surely my toes have smudged the edges   thanks for the read my friend
Denise
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10 posted 05-25-2000 11:39 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Excellent poem, Corazon! You surely do have a way with words!

Denise
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That would be one lucky fella, Corazon, and, then again, maybe not. To have you but not have you could be a very bittersweet experience.  The poem is loverly  
wayoutwalt
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12 posted 05-25-2000 02:11 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

electrofied this poem is i like i like!
kat
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I can relate. Beautiful poem.  
Corazon
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one last thank you before I have to leave for 4 days....denise, walt, kat, thanks much...and bal, that is a sweet thing to say, thank you kindly sir  
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