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Holly
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since 2000-05-12
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Arkansas

0 posted 2000-05-24 10:42 AM


"I JUST WANT"


I just want to be loved-to feel I'll always be held above.
I just want to be adored-to know someone will always be my cure.
I just want to be held at night-to know someone can promise me it'll be alright.
I just want to be touched-to know someone wants me that much.
I just want to be kissed-everytime I'm here and everytime I'm missed.
I just want to have that pure love-the one that would never be enough.
I need and want these things more than life itself.
I want to have my dreams heard, my soul lightened, and my tears wiped...what's so wrong with this?



 

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Cyndey
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since 2000-05-18
Posts 84
Arkansas
1 posted 2000-05-24 11:22 AM


Holly~
Wow... We must be close to on the same plane here! What else is new, uh? How well do I understand those agonizing emotions you so well expressed in your poem. Great work as always!
Cyn

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
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ireland
2 posted 2000-05-24 02:19 PM


We all desire to be loved by someone special, I live in the hopes that one day
I will find true love.

Keep wanting and keep writing, a great poem.  




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Douglas Adams.

"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-05-24 03:18 PM


Hey, dreams come true....at least I hope so!!! Great poem!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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