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The Same Moon

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Marge Tindal
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The Same Moon
~*Marge Tindal*~

We see the same moon
with different faces
Mine bright and airy
Yours in dark places

Mine waltzing slowly
across Milky-Way sky
Yours with cresting
of tear-filled eye

Come with me
into the night
share my moon
of glowing light

Out of the shadows
of your dark moon sky
The moon of lovers
in wink of eye

Let us dance
'neath the glow of the moon
Chasing the shadows
of your darkest gloom

Out of the velvet
sky of the night
Dance now young lovers
in the glowing moonlight

On rapture of heart
caught in surprise
The longing in
another's eyes






 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


1 posted 05-24-2000 07:58 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Marge, this is a truly lovely poem....
I've said this and I'll say it again:
You are a poetess supreme, your poetry is WOW!!!

Love and hugs,
Lil' Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 05-24-2000 08:05 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lil' Lizzie~
And YOU my little 'mentee' are such a delight to this heart.
Have a wonderful day and know that the sunshine of Florida shines brighter because you lighten my heart with your friendship.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


3 posted 05-24-2000 08:16 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Marge, just had to pop back in!! Firstly...ahem...thank you for the honour
of being first to reply to this superb poem.
Secondly, thanks for being so sweet...what a wonderful mentor you are!!!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie
  



"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."


[This message has been edited by ESP (edited 05-24-2000).]
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4 posted 05-24-2000 10:13 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lovely, as always, Marge!

Denise
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Lovely, Marge!  So, like, is this an invitation to us all at passions?  Hope you have plenty of room at your house!!!

Corinne
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Lil' Lizzie~
Love n' hugs to you too.
What a nice friend you are.
You make mentoring such a fun thing to do.
Patiently waiting for your 'post'.  

Denise~
Thank you again, my friend.

Corinne~
I've said it before ...
I''ll say it again ...
COME ON DOWN !  
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com             



[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 05-25-2000).]
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7 posted 05-24-2000 10:40 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Marge, you're a hard writer to follow. Another beautiful piece...I love it.

jwesley
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8 posted 05-24-2000 11:14 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Aw, Marge, I can't think of anyone I'd rather have moon me.......beautiful poem  
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9 posted 05-24-2000 11:19 PM       View Profile for Mote   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mote

Lovely poem.

Angel`Fox
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10 posted 05-24-2000 11:49 PM       View Profile for Angel`Fox   Email Angel`Fox   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Angel`Fox's Home Page   View IP for Angel`Fox

wow, very nice indeed!!

  -=> Angel`Fox <=-

{~._.~} {~._.~} {~._.~} {~._.~}
( ) ( ) ( ) ( )
()H() ()U() ()G() ()S()
(_)-(_) (_)-(_) (_)-(_) (_)-(_)
"Love seeketh not itself to please
Nor for itself hath any care,
But for another gives its ease,
And builds a heaven in hell's despair"
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11 posted 05-25-2000 06:18 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

((Sigh)) Marge this is a very romantic piece and your caring personality shines through in

Come with me
into the night
Share my moon
of glowing light

I see wings wrapping around someone as I read this stanza

A very peaceful and loving poem  

Enjoyed...Tracie


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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JWesley~
Glad you enjoyed.
'Hard to follow'? ...
I'd like to think I've drawn you a map.

Balladeer~
Awwwww !
You wish !  

Mote~
Thank you.

Angel'Fox~
I appreciate the 'wow'.

Tracie~
How very perceptive you are, my friend.
Exactly !  
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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13 posted 05-25-2000 08:36 AM       View Profile for kat   Email kat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kat

Wow! I really loved your poem!
Kat  
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14 posted 05-25-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh Marge,like the moon your poetry glows! this is beautiful  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


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this is very nicely done
flows so well and sets such a pleasing
mood
From the hand of an angel

Rex
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16 posted 05-25-2000 10:52 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Your words are always so soothing, Mom...thanks again for being such an inspiration of hope....wonderful!
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17 posted 05-25-2000 03:50 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

I LOVE THIS MARGE

hehe, but I love all your stuff
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Wonderful. Love it.
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You are definantly the inspiration of love and sunshine!!!!!   I feel as though I'm drowning in your good karma as we speak!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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Moonlight becomes you, Marge...this is so lovely!
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Oh Marge, this is beautiful! It's amazing how love can make people see things in such a diffrent way...

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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Kat~
Thank you so much.

DarkAngel~
I so appreciate your replies.

Rex~
Like the rays of the moonglow ...
it fell to the pages of my heart.
Thank you for the 'angelic' reply.

Serenity~
Thanks.  Hope can often come from inspirations of the heart.

Kevin~
Hey, cutie pie !  Thank you, my friend.

Lily~
Thanks so much.

Devina~
Hon ... do that 'Karma' back-stroke !  

Martie~
Now ya' got me singing ...  

LoveBug~
Yes, love ... it would seem that it is so.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Marge~

Just lovely, my friend!!!  
The moon is so beautiful at times...
Great writing!!

LW


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--Michael W. Smith
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Gotta love you and your moons, Marge..
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