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The Same Moon
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The Same Moon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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The Same Moon ~*Marge Tindal*~ We see the same moon with different faces Mine bright and airy Yours in dark places Mine waltzing slowly across Milky-Way sky Yours with cresting of tear-filled eye Come with me into the night share my moon of glowing light Out of the shadows of your dark moon sky The moon of lovers in wink of eye Let us dance 'neath the glow of the moon Chasing the shadows of your darkest gloom Out of the velvet sky of the night Dance now young lovers in the glowing moonlight On rapture of heart caught in surprise The longing in another's eyes ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Marge, this is a truly lovely poem.... I've said this and I'll say it again: You are a poetess supreme, your poetry is WOW!!! Love and hugs, Lil' Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lil' Lizzie~ And YOU my little 'mentee' are such a delight to this heart. Have a wonderful day and know that the sunshine of Florida shines brighter because you lighten my heart with your friendship. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Marge, just had to pop back in!! Firstly...ahem...thank you for the honour of being first to reply to this superb poem. Secondly, thanks for being so sweet...what a wonderful mentor you are!!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie < !signature--> "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." [This message has been edited by ESP (edited 05-24-2000).] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely, as always, Marge! Denise |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely, Marge! So, like, is this an invitation to us all at passions? Hope you have plenty of room at your house!!! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lil' Lizzie~ Love n' hugs to you too. What a nice friend you are. You make mentoring such a fun thing to do. Patiently waiting for your 'post'.  Denise~ Thank you again, my friend. Corinne~ I've said it before ... I''ll say it again ... COME ON DOWN ! ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 05-25-2000).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Marge, you're a hard writer to follow. Another beautiful piece...I love it. jwesley |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Aw, Marge, I can't think of anyone I'd rather have moon me.......beautiful poem  |
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Mote Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 31 |
Lovely poem. |
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Angel`Fox Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 32Ottawa, Ontario Canada |
wow, very nice indeed!! -=> Angel`Fox <=- {~._.~} {~._.~} {~._.~} {~._.~} ( ° ) ( ° ) ( ° ) ( ° ) ()¯H¯() ()¯U¯() ()¯G¯() ()¯S¯() (_)-(_) (_)-(_) (_)-(_) (_)-(_) "Love seeketh not itself to please Nor for itself hath any care, But for another gives its ease, And builds a heaven in hell's despair" |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
((Sigh)) Marge this is a very romantic piece and your caring personality shines through in Come with me into the night Share my moon of glowing light I see wings wrapping around someone as I read this stanza A very peaceful and loving poem Enjoyed...Tracie Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ Glad you enjoyed. 'Hard to follow'? ... I'd like to think I've drawn you a map. Balladeer~ Awwwww ! You wish ! Mote~ Thank you. Angel'Fox~ I appreciate the 'wow'. Tracie~ How very perceptive you are, my friend. Exactly ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Wow! I really loved your poem! Kat |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Marge,like the moon your poetry glows! this is beautiful Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
this is very nicely done flows so well and sets such a pleasing mood From the hand of an angel Rex |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Your words are always so soothing, Mom...thanks again for being such an inspiration of hope....wonderful! |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
I LOVE THIS MARGE hehe, but I love all your stuff |
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Lily121 Junior Member
since 2000-05-23
Posts 24 |
Wonderful. Love it. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You are definantly the inspiration of love and sunshine!!!!! I feel as though I'm drowning in your good karma as we speak!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Moonlight becomes you, Marge...this is so lovely! |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Oh Marge, this is beautiful! It's amazing how love can make people see things in such a diffrent way... "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kat~ Thank you so much. DarkAngel~ I so appreciate your replies. Rex~ Like the rays of the moonglow ... it fell to the pages of my heart. Thank you for the 'angelic' reply. Serenity~ Thanks. Hope can often come from inspirations of the heart. Kevin~ Hey, cutie pie ! Thank you, my friend. Lily~ Thanks so much. Devina~ Hon ... do that 'Karma' back-stroke ! Martie~ Now ya' got me singing ... LoveBug~ Yes, love ... it would seem that it is so. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Just lovely, my friend!!! The moon is so beautiful at times... Great writing!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Gotta love you and your moons, Marge..  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Thanks - I am a regular 'Luna-Toon'. Nan~ Thank you so much for your sweet reply. I do seem to get inspired by the moon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh, Marge this one should be put on a card .. tis so sweet Coco |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Oh, Marge~ I love it when you write about the moon. You know that the night time always gets to me, dear! Love Ya! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Marge Lovely. You are truly a font. ~Lorraine |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CocoBaci~ I thank you ... you are welcomed to put it on a card if you'd like. TerryW~ Hon, nightime is the right time for *hugging* you ! Thank you so much. Love ya' Lorraine~ Thank you for liking the fountain of my heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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