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mitymopr
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0 posted 2000-05-24 02:35 AM


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bsquirrel
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1 posted 2000-05-24 02:48 AM


I enj**ed this. Well, at least some part of me did.   I'm not going to use the cliche "Things get better"; that's probably the last thing you want to hear. But I will say, isn't it great that poetry can help you express what you can't say aloud except alone?

Mike

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2000-05-24 02:51 AM


now I'm getting paranoid--this sounded WAY too familiar...

But I do approve...sometimes even hitting the asterisks make ya feel better...


wayoutwalt
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3 posted 2000-05-24 02:54 AM


sometimes it may be good to let it out but i just hit 1000 replies and i could get to member emeritus easily and no one would ever know i replied to this one a thousand times cuz methinks soon it'll be deleted yuh
bsquirrel
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4 posted 2000-05-24 02:57 AM


I know, Walt. And so does Serenity. You're OURS!   And I think this poem's fine.

Mike

wayoutwalt
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5 posted 2000-05-24 03:00 AM


but but it made me think words in my mind that horrified me why i never knew i knew these words and now i am randomly shouting them as i am naked and frothing but yuh the poem is well done but yuh know the rules
serenity blaze
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6 posted 2000-05-24 05:51 AM


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Now that I feel better---the point, I think,
is not what we think--but that we think...
and this, is rage and hurt and pain expressed, no, not beautifully, but just the way it is.....thank you...

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serenity blaze
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7 posted 2000-05-24 06:41 AM


forgot to add---GREAT TITLE
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