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kat
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since 2000-05-20
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0 posted 2000-05-24 02:25 AM


Love Affair

Darkest of nights
Whirling thoughts of confusion
No answers in sight
Only fantasy and illusion

A bounty of dreams
Their need to be real
Hopes at times shattered
For a heart’s need to feel

Patiently waiting
Life’s unforeseen events
Hanging in limbo
In hopes of catching a glimpse

Cold yet warm
In an unpredictable storm
Caught in a spiral
Destinations unknown

Never forgetting
Moments of bliss
Forever hopeful
For not one to miss

Timeless engagements
Of moments of passion
Secretive and wondrous
Approached with caution

Protecting the heart
Yet leaving it exposed
Where everything is open
And no doors are closed

Committed to one
In love with another
A lover that is willing
It gets harder and harder




© Copyright 2000 kat - All Rights Reserved
CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

1 posted 2000-05-24 02:54 AM


Ohh Kat, this is really good what emotions you have expressed here.
"Caught in a spiral destinations unknown" a captivating verse
CocoBaci

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)
2 posted 2000-05-24 02:55 AM


its true it does get harder.... but here is a smile and a welcome to passions greeting
Nan
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3 posted 2000-05-24 07:55 AM


with wayoutwaltwelcoming with a wave... you must be a good'n.... Welcome to Passions - Check your email for a special greeting....
MysticalNights
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since 2000-05-17
Posts 112
Oklahoma
4 posted 2000-05-24 09:15 AM


Kat, great piece..I can imagine your confusion in awkward times such as these.
" Committed to one
  In love with another
  A lover that is willing
  It gets harder and harder"  That hurts......

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
5 posted 2000-05-24 01:46 PM


Nice work, kat

Lets see more of your work soon....

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

Regards, sudhir

 Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.

Irie
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
6 posted 2000-05-24 03:35 PM


It's really not fair is it. To be allowed to fall for one
who's already spoken for.
This is very well expressed Kat,
And welcome to Passions.  

~Sheri

netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
7 posted 2000-05-24 03:57 PM


Welcome to Passions, Kat -

What a beautiful poem to start out with
for your grand entrance --

Ah, at the mysteries of love.

~netswan

Corazon
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209

8 posted 2000-05-24 04:19 PM


welcome, very nice writing, love...sigh...
you hit it perfectly  

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
9 posted 2000-05-24 04:36 PM


"committed to one, in love with another,a lover that's willing, it get's harder and harder"  Yeah, man...if that doesn't sound like some of my beer drinking red-neck friends, there'll never be a description of them.

Loved the piece...welcome to passions...

jwesley

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
10 posted 2000-05-24 05:51 PM


welcome to passions, a great poem.
powerful emotional exploration,

Cold yet warm
In an unpredictable storm
Caught in a spiral
Destinations unknown

Never forgetting
Moments of bliss
Forever hopeful
For not one to miss

Timeless engagements
Of moments of passion
Secretive and wondrous
Approached with caution

Protecting the heart
Yet leaving it exposed
Where everything is open
And no doors are closed

Committed to one
In love with another
A lover that is willing
It gets harder and harder


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Douglas Adams.

"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto



Dark Angel
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11 posted 2000-05-24 07:10 PM


Committed to one
In love with another
A lover that is willing
It gets harder and harder


hmmmm I know just how you feel...Great poem!

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)



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12 posted 2000-05-24 10:09 PM


Kat~
Welcome to Passion's.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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kat
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since 2000-05-20
Posts 387

13 posted 2000-05-24 11:41 PM


Thanks to everyone for all your beautiful words.  I'm really new at this and I wasn't sure if I was going to post this poem because it's very personal to me, but something compelled me to do so.  You've made me feel very welcome.  Thank-you  
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
14 posted 2000-05-25 01:04 AM


Ah..a lovely entrance. Welcome to the family...  
Angel`Fox
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since 2000-05-20
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Ottawa, Ontario Canada
15 posted 2000-05-25 01:45 AM


Very nice,...

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"Love seeketh not itself to please
Nor for itself hath any care,
But for another gives its ease,
And builds a heaven in hell's despair"


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