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mitymopr
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since 05-24-2000
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0 posted 05-24-2000 01:52 AM       View Profile for mitymopr   Email mitymopr   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mitymopr

I sit here alone
with only a beer
knowing she is out there
hopefully near
A tear drops my eye
this blows being lonely
oh god
if only someone would stop by
my heart cries out
"why does it hurt?"
I'm stronger than this
so here I sit
alone, still
until we meet
under god's will

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Crystal Lynn
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since 05-21-2000
Posts 19
Miami, FL. USA


1 posted 05-24-2000 02:29 PM       View Profile for Crystal Lynn   Email Crystal Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystal Lynn

great poem   i look forward to reading others take care....

crystal
Lucius Cade
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since 03-23-2000
Posts 239
Saskatchewan


2 posted 05-24-2000 02:32 PM       View Profile for Lucius Cade   Email Lucius Cade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucius Cade

Beer makes it worse yet I know I still use it to ease my pain. Great poem

 Lucidity is the answer to all problems
JamesMichael
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since 11-16-1999
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


3 posted 05-24-2000 04:24 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I enjoyed reading this..it has a nice flow...I feel like a beer now.  James
jwesley
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since 04-30-2000
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Texas . . .


4 posted 05-24-2000 04:27 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Beer!  Wonderful sedative.  If only it'd never wear off, huh?  Nice, keep at it.
j.
tracie66
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since 01-18-2000
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Victoria, Australia


5 posted 05-25-2000 05:11 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Oh what saddness and loneliness I felt when reading this  
Hope your days are brighter soon  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


 
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