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svtcobra
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0 posted 05-24-2000 01:47 AM       View Profile for svtcobra   Email svtcobra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for svtcobra

How many times can it happen
How can two people connect like this
How heavy my heart is
How radiant your eyes are
How light my steps now are
How close can we get
How can you belong to someone else
© Copyright 2000 David J. Gassen - All Rights Reserved
Irie
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Washington State


1 posted 05-24-2000 01:50 AM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

Ooo Ouch! This one hurts. I know where you're
coming from. Been there my friend!
What a powerful poem in such short words.
Well Done.  
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


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WOW! This was perfect! Short but straight to the point!  
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