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Parker
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... the old black rum


0 posted 05-24-2000 12:58 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Sweet

She resists with a plea
So confused by her needs
Does she take what she wants
or Just smile at the thought

The desire's so strong
is the taking so wrong
can she have what she has,
and have what she wants

the weakness overcomes
and the taste is so yumm
a satisfying treat,
Oh, and the taste is so sweet.

James Parker Haley 20000


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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


1 posted 05-24-2000 01:15 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

She knows what she wants,
Love to her heart to keep,
She dreams sweet dreams in her sleep,

Thoughts that dance to willows that weep,
Into his heart she waits for a small peek,
Within his poetry, she finds his soul there,

Laid out and broken, bare,
She cries for his pain, To be a heart complete,
Into his words I am wrapped like a candy treat,
Tis' ever delicious, poetry so sweet.
serenity blaze
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2 posted 05-24-2000 01:37 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Parker---oh you know me now.....and if you
         don't that's as sweet a lie as I
         have heard for awhile...smiling....
         Thank you...
Janet Marie
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3 posted 05-24-2000 08:41 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

me thinks she should have her cake and eat it too...(if shes really good)
delish little bite here from you parker-man...
a sweet treat indeed...
but then we would expect nothing less from
you ...
later sweet-parker-gator
jm

Corinne
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state of confusion


4 posted 05-24-2000 10:11 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Hmmm, she muses.

As in the apple from the forbidden tree,
woman has succumbed, tempted by thee.

Corinne
Corazon
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5 posted 05-24-2000 11:24 AM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

oh my, a man who understands women *g* you are a rare breed   great poem  
Corinne
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state of confusion


6 posted 05-24-2000 10:11 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

back to the top you go!
Parker
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... the old black rum


7 posted 05-25-2000 11:47 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

A Romantic Heart, thank you for that wonderful reply it was very sweet.  

serenity, I have more sweet lies, I'll just whisper them.  

Janet, thank you as always, always putting me on a pedistal....lol

Corinne, temptation by a sweet refrain....
I am tempted by the soul of the Tapestry
A waif of the sea, pure and victual....

Corazon, I couldn't claim to understand them at all, they are a mystery that is sweet and elusive.... thank you for your comment.

Parker  

Kit McCallum
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8 posted 05-25-2000 11:51 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Oh James ... if we could only have it "all" ... such sweetness it would be indeed ... wonderful poem!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Parker
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... the old black rum


9 posted 05-26-2000 09:50 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Kit, what you mean we can't, darn.
Thanks for replying

Parker
brian madden
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10 posted 05-26-2000 03:24 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Sweetness follows,

the weakness overcomes
and the taste is so yumm
a satisfying treat,
Oh, and the taste is so sweet.

love is the sweetest fruit of all.
really good poem, enjoyed it alot.



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Parker
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... the old black rum


11 posted 05-27-2000 03:06 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

brian, thank you for the kind reply. It can be sinfully sweet at time too.  

Parker
insect
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12 posted 05-27-2000 07:14 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

Sweetness can be irresistible!
Excellent poem!
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