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Ethan Halo
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0 posted 05-23-2000 09:01 PM       View Profile for Ethan Halo   Email Ethan Halo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Ethan Halo's Home Page   View IP for Ethan Halo


lonely now

We used to spend the day in bed;
rub our feet together 'cause the blanket was too short.
let the phone ring; shut the door on the world.
you know,
i'd never had no reasons before
to ever doubt the look in your eye.
And now it's clear to both of us:
A wishing well for broken dreams
and if you make a wish,
you can hear the screams.

You said that it's over.
But we both know better.
You said that i don't love you.
But you don't remember...

you don't feel nothing.

We used to sneak in through your backgate
Hoping your parents wouldn't hear us.
We could stay up all night.
I can still hear you laugh...
Now it's a god-awful sound.
Oh, please remember...

You said that it's over.
But we both know better.
You said that i don't love you.
But you don't remember...

you don't feel nothing.
and i'm lonely now.


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Ethan Halo
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on the roof again


1 posted 05-23-2000 09:24 PM       View Profile for Ethan Halo   Email Ethan Halo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ethan Halo's Home Page   View IP for Ethan Halo

This is a little experiment of mine. it matches up with the first two verses of Matchbox 20's "kody". tell me what ya think...
Ethan Halo
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2 posted 09-29-2000 02:26 AM       View Profile for Ethan Halo   Email Ethan Halo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ethan Halo's Home Page   View IP for Ethan Halo

just testin the new signature....

I won't become as dumb as some and succumb to scum. It's cumbersome, I'm tryin to do well on this Earth, but it's been Hell on this Earth, since I fel
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