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realizing reality kinda sucks

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Crystal Lynn
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Miami, FL. USA


0 posted 05-23-2000 07:47 PM       View Profile for Crystal Lynn   Email Crystal Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystal Lynn


now its clear
youve made ur choice
but im still here
waiting for your voice
i cry uncontrollably
knowing it wont do anything
but something in my heart
wont let me move on
i love you
thats all i want to hear
why is it so hard
for you to say those words to me
but i guess it is
at least for you to say them to me
youve said them to her
and it hurts to know the truth
i hate you
for making me feel this way
ive never felt this desire
this longing so strong
and yet get nothing in return
whats wrong with me
am i that undesirable to you
others try to take ur place
but it doesnt work
my heart wont let them
when will this end
i alone know the answer
and this will all make sense to me
cuz in the future ill see
that him and i
we were never meant to be
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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


1 posted 05-23-2000 07:56 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Exactly..I enjoyed reading.  James
Cerenity
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since 02-16-2000
Posts 2712
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2 posted 05-24-2000 08:55 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Crystal,

This is a touching poem and one you show much feeling in, time is not what you want to hear as the answer but it looks like it is and seems you know that by your poem, and sharing your feelings here can pass much time, so I look forward to more of your work.

WELCOME TO PASSIONS

Love,  Cerenity
Poet deVine
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3 posted 05-24-2000 09:48 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special welcome.  
Sudhir Iyer
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since 04-26-2000
Posts 7206
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium


4 posted 05-24-2000 01:48 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Thoughtful piece of writing, Crystal Lynn


WELCOME TO PASSIONS !!!

Regards, sudhir

 Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


5 posted 05-24-2000 01:56 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Welcome to Passions, Crystal Lynn!! This is a great first post!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie
  


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