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The Missing Whole

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Cyndey
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0 posted 05-23-2000 05:16 PM       View Profile for Cyndey   Email Cyndey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Cyndey's Home Page   View IP for Cyndey

The Void is there
Ever pressing around
The center of my heart
Long ago frozen
But the Thaw has come
Yet, I still feel Numb.
Will I ever feel complete?
Shall I ever find
The other half of me?
Will I forever walk the Earth
One half of a Missing Whole?


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Denise
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1 posted 05-23-2000 09:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very nice! I hope you find the other half!

Denise
Cyndey
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2 posted 05-23-2000 10:38 PM       View Profile for Cyndey   Email Cyndey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Cyndey's Home Page   View IP for Cyndey

glad you enjoyed reading the poem ...
Hopefully I'll find that missing part sooner or later  
Thanks Denise~
Cyndey
spiked
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3 posted 05-23-2000 10:39 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

I hope you find what your looking for.
very well expressed
Rich
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4 posted 05-24-2000 09:46 AM       View Profile for MysticalNights   Email MysticalNights   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MysticalNights

nice poem...hang in there!
Holly
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5 posted 05-24-2000 10:38 AM       View Profile for Holly   Email Holly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Holly's Home Page   View IP for Holly

Cyndey-
My dear friend..I feel your pain on this one too! Since I too, would love to find my missing whole. Sometimes we think we have and then find out the painful truth later on. Great poem! You always surprise me.  
-Holly


 
Cyndey
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6 posted 05-24-2000 11:18 AM       View Profile for Cyndey   Email Cyndey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Cyndey's Home Page   View IP for Cyndey

Rich ~ Mystical~
Thanks for the encouragement, and for enjoying the read  
Holly~
Well, You know I try not to surprise you too often~ But when you surprise me I'll surprise you! lol   Thanks my amiga~
Cyndey
brian madden
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7 posted 05-24-2000 03:48 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

I can definitely relate to your poem, you described it perfectly, great poem.

The Void is there
Ever pressing around
The center of my heart
Long ago frozen
But the Thaw has come
Yet, I still feel Numb.


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jwesley
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8 posted 05-24-2000 06:43 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Nicely put!  Don't believe I've read any of your work yet...be asured, thought, I'll be doing so from now on.


jwesley
Cyndey
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9 posted 05-24-2000 08:50 PM       View Profile for Cyndey   Email Cyndey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Cyndey's Home Page   View IP for Cyndey

Brian~
I'm glad you liked the poem, however if you are able to relate to the feelings there I hope you too find your other half... to fill in the void...
JWesley~
I also haven't read any of your work but I'll definately be on the look out from here out!  
Thanks guys!
Cyndey
 
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