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Angel
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0 posted 05-23-2000 04:43 PM       View Profile for Angel   Email Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Angel

I continue to try, but there is no answer
It's a one sided conversation
The phone continues to ring...
I continue to yell about you not caring
If you don't think it's worth it,
Then why should I?
Because, unlike you, I do still care
And want us to keep going
But it's like a double edged sword...
One side you don't give me space
The other you pretend not to care
Or at least shut me out
Either way it rips me apart inside
And yet I let the phone ring
I continue to try...
As I cling to the fleeting false hope
That someday you'll come to your senses
Still no answer...

~Susie


 "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility."
~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow "Driftwood"

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netswan
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1 posted 05-23-2000 04:52 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Heartfelt, Angel -- I can feel your pain

Somebody better answer that phone soon --)

~netswan
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2 posted 05-23-2000 04:55 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Oh sweetness,....take care of you.  This piece just jumped out and grabbed me by the heart.  Wonderful expression. *Peace.
Angel
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3 posted 05-23-2000 07:22 PM       View Profile for Angel   Email Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel

netswan~
Tell me about it, the ringing starting to hurt my ears  .  

Spitfire~
Thanks but it's really not about me  . Glad you enjoyed it though  

~Susie


 "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility."
~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow "Driftwood"

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