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-My Beautiful Storm-

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Holly
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0 posted 05-23-2000 02:49 PM       View Profile for Holly   Email Holly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Holly's Home Page   View IP for Holly

-My Beautiful Storm-


like a beautiful storm you blew into my heart of stone
thoughts of you running through my mind, taking away the feelings of being alone

you've opened my eyes to so much, you've given me back that passionate rush
how I've missed that feeling in my world, how I wanted so much to be just yours

facing the truth of never having you in my arms again, I start clinging to you as my friend
knowing this storm has to come to an end,
I realize my worst fear...the loss of my lover and my friend

oh how I will always love that beautiful storm that blew into my heart....even while it rips me apart



 
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Lucius Cade
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1 posted 05-23-2000 02:55 PM       View Profile for Lucius Cade   Email Lucius Cade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucius Cade

Beautiful poem,

you've opened my eyes to so much, you've given me back that passionate rush
how I've missed that feeling in my world,

I love that part I can relate.

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ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


2 posted 05-23-2000 03:05 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Excellent description here, short and so full of emotion and turmoil. Wow!

oh how I will always love that beautiful storm that blew into my heart....even while it rips me apart
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This line especially hits home...beautifully expressed

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Lizzie


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Cyndey
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3 posted 05-23-2000 05:10 PM       View Profile for Cyndey   Email Cyndey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Cyndey's Home Page   View IP for Cyndey

Holly...
I know how and understand these feelings you've managed to express so eloquently. such a beautiful poem, very fluid, very raw and heart rending...
You know if you ever need to talk I'm there..
Cyndey
MysticalNights
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4 posted 05-23-2000 11:42 PM       View Profile for MysticalNights   Email MysticalNights   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MysticalNights

Wonderful poem...

"knowing this storm has to come to an end,
i realize my worst fear...the loss of my lover and my friend"

Been there...  Hope to never have to go through it again...
 
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