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Bride to her Beloved..........#3 in vampire series

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Marina
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0 posted 05-23-2000 11:20 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Marina



Bride to her Beloved


He was the dark magic maker
A mere once mortal man
Traveled through hell’s half acre
To make her his queen, now damned

His constant companion and lover
Reborn by him to darkness
So many secrets to uncover
His gift given, no less

Love be their conviction
In discovery of Heaven and Hell
A future beyond prediction
Knowledge through his death knell

She rouses through birth pangs
Flawless and perfect, in every way
Hungering, to use new firm fangs
Alas, but soon the light of day

Her mortal body dead and gone
Now she slumbers in coffin
Glimpsed, her last break of dawn
Sleep now, as he has done so often

Awaken…….As the bride, to her beloved


Marina May 2000



[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 05-23-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Marina Crossley - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 05-23-2000 03:47 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

so..I did tell you about that blind date LOL
wow girl...you are really enjoying writing these arent you...
it shows in the perfection
of the piece...
great goth and vampy imagery
perfect rhyme too.
more more...
later-marina-gator
jm

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They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


netswan
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2 posted 05-23-2000 04:49 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Oh, Marina - sweet poetry - what a
great theme --)

Such fantastic writing.  Enjoyed much.

~netswan
Marina
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3 posted 05-23-2000 08:35 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Jan, you know I just couldn't keep my mouth shut about that blind date of yours! LOl
But you blow it girl.....I told everyone that it was Gemini's fault!!! LOL
Just another drunked night eh!!!

Netswan, thank you I am glad you liked the theme and my writing.

Marina
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4 posted 05-23-2000 11:05 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Excellent Marina, I really like what you've done with this series. . . please tell me that there's more. . .

"Traveled through hell's half acre
To make her his queen, now damned"

Quite wonderful my friend. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

JamesMichael
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5 posted 05-24-2000 06:05 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"He was the dark magic maker
a mere once mortal man
Traveled thru hell's half acre
to make her his queen, now damned."
This part reads so well..I would like to hear Vincent Price reading and dramatizing these words.  I'd even settle for Orson Wells.   James
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6 posted 05-31-2000 01:00 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Hey Marina, I finally found it...hehe

Very well written m'friend, Love these vampire pieces....i hope you keep 'em coming


 All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep


Marina
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7 posted 05-31-2000 11:51 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Thank you to all.......I had forgotten I had posted this. Just a little brain dead!

Sven, thank you.  I didn't know you liked my dark side so much.....i can't always be so sweet and innocent you know!

James, that is so cool.  i never thought about someone reading it with a creepy voice.

Hey Sven you want to try  it?? LOL

Jeff, digging through the old again I see. Thank you my friend for finding this.  I don't honestly know if I will continue the series......running out of ideas.

Marina
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