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Go Fly A Kite !

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Marge Tindal
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Go Fly A Kite
~*Marge Tindal*~


Let
me rise
above the earth
suspended only by the
string held so ever gently
in your hands. Let me dance
with the wind. Playing with the
currents that take me further away
from you. I am free for the moment
from the cares of the world. Held safely
by the strings of your love. Do not let me
be so lofty that I get out of your sight.
Bring me back, no longer do I wish to
be free. As you slowly reel me in
do not let the string break.
I wouldn't want to end
up hopelessly
entangled
in some
strange
yard
tree

Just
ever
so
often
let
me
fly
free
*
*
*
*
*





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 05-23-2000 07:36 AM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

HOW IMAGINATIVE!!!!!!

 Kathleen
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Sudhir Iyer
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Lovely Presentation, thought-inspiring words...

As always, this is wonderful, Marge.

I think I will go fly a kite  

Regards,
Sudhir

 Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.
Cerenity
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3 posted 05-23-2000 08:36 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Marge,

I love this, the letting go just enough to feel freedom yet not without a gental hold or security of the foundation of love, Marge this is perfect.

Love,  Cerenity
Honeybee
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4 posted 05-23-2000 09:15 AM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

You've inspired me to go fly my own kite!

Excellent presentation as always, and of course excellent thought!    I'm starting to become a groupie of your work LOL  All hail Queen Marge, queen of all poets  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
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5 posted 05-23-2000 02:11 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

This is brilliant, Marge! I have never before thought about flying kites being related to relationships...simply wonderful comparison, as usual so much wisdom in your words. You could start your own fan club and have plenty of members! Poetess of wonder and wisdom, that's you!! Love ya!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
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6 posted 05-23-2000 03:05 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Marge, with your beauty I just might
Get that desire to fly a kite
But, even though we're nicely matched
Does there have to be a string attached?  

Love the poem, my high flying friend  
netswan
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WEEEEEE and the wind blows Free ---
"Let's do go fly a kite!"

Wonderfully creative, Marge.

~netswan
Martie
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Marge hon, you always soar---string or not.  Wonderful poem!
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 05-23-2000 08:31 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Kathleen~
THANK YOU !!!!!

Sudhir~
Thank you, my poet friend.

Cerenity~
You got the 'drift' completely !  

Melissa~
What a doll !
I've got my very own groupie !
WAHOO !  Thank you.

Lil' Lizzie~
Well ...... only if you'll be President !  

Balladeer~
Sweetie, you would love
the itsy-bitsy, teeny-weeny
string upon
my kite-flying bikini !

Nuttin' like flying kites
half-nekkid !  

NetSwan~
I fly kites 'for real' !
I love the serenity of it.
Let's all go ... !  What fun !

Martie~
Come 'soar' with me, my friend.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

SpitFire
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10 posted 05-23-2000 08:42 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~You creative little devil you!!!  This is great....so airy and fun...and boy what a concept.  Thank you as always
Lorraine Nisbet
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WOW!!!  I love it.  I wonder where I can get me a kite?  Great work.

~Lorraine
wayoutwalt
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12 posted 05-23-2000 10:03 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

very cool (cuz its breezy and good kite flyin weather) poem!
spiked
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13 posted 05-23-2000 10:08 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Very artistically done, Pen and imagination working hand in hand.
Thanks
Rich
Marge Tindal
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14 posted 05-23-2000 10:27 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

SpitFire~
Gosh !  You're so great !
Thank you.

Lorraine~
KITES-R-US !  

Walt~
Now that's an outing to try with
your kids ... for sure !

Spiked~
So glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks for your reply.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Marge this was a great poem loved the way you laid it out like a kite. How your words were so true. We do like to get ourselves tanged up in tree. Loved the similies.
Marge Tindal
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16 posted 05-24-2000 07:37 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

RoseBud~
Thank you so much.
Glad you enjoyed it.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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