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Dark Angel
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0 posted 05-23-2000 05:53 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel




Oh how I ache for
        the sunshine, Oh
how I need her warmth
   to bathe in her glory
          and her kiss on
my skin

   her brightness surrounds
me and I feel my aura
     glow like the  tulips
               and poppies
I feel myself grow

            but

there is a cloud
       and he moves
         slowly toward her
hovering, daring to
     intercept her light

             he is

       carried by the wind…
will he cast a shadow?
    a dark shaped coldness
     or will I revel
           continuously in
       my sun?


Dark Angel
23/5/00


  



 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)




[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 05-23-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 05-23-2000 05:59 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Excellent Dark Angel ... I really enjoyed the powerful comparison you've used here ... it gave me a little chill as I read!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 05-23-2000 06:14 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DarkAngel~
Well, I'm no meteorologist, but I predict fair skies in your future - with LOTS of sunshine.

I enjoyed the thoughts and the formatting in this one.  Nicely done.
~*Marge*~




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Severn
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3 posted 05-23-2000 07:15 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Wow Maree...amazing.

This just aches this does.

I imagine you will indeed continue to revel...

K
WhtDove
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4 posted 05-23-2000 11:29 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Woohoo! I'm all for sunshine girl!
(but hey, not too many of those poppies ok?)
         LOL


If the wind keeps blowing then the clouds keep moving, and it won't cover the sun for long!  

Excellent work!
Dark Angel
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5 posted 05-24-2000 01:58 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Kit a chill hey?, brrrrr blame it on the cloud heheh. seriously thank you so much.  

Marge honey, thank you so much I wish the same for you.  

Soul-Sis I beleive I will do so   Thanks hon


Angel, yeah well I like those Poppies!   Awwww  not fair!   Thanks hon


 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


wayoutwalt
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6 posted 05-24-2000 03:33 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

poppies good sun poisoning bad poem good poppies bad
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