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falling for someone with a significant other

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svtcobra
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since 05-23-2000
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Syracuse,NY USA


0 posted 05-23-2000 01:18 AM       View Profile for svtcobra   Email svtcobra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for svtcobra

I want to
be there for you
whenever you're in need

I want to
hold you
and not have to let you go

I want to
tell the world
of the beauty I have found

I want to
have the chance
to be all you deserve

A glance, a fragerance, a connection and those enchanting eyes

The need to move forward is eminent
the road ahead blurred

Do I follow the heart and open up
to the chance of being hurt

Do I follow my head, move on
and deny the heart its emotion

Do I dream of you
only night and day

Do I truly want all of you
more than words can say

© Copyright 2000 David J. Gassen - All Rights Reserved
Angelwings
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since 08-27-99
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IL, USA


1 posted 05-23-2000 01:22 AM       View Profile for Angelwings   Email Angelwings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angelwings

What a wonderful description of love and true dedication.  I think you should follow your heart.  Thank you for sharing your poetry.  I look forward to reading more.
netswan
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2 posted 05-23-2000 01:28 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Welcome to Passions, svtcobra!
Oh, the dark hidden passions of the
heart beating for one that is taken.

Great Poem, shows the pain and indecision.

~netswan
Crystal Lynn
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since 05-21-2000
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Miami, FL. USA


3 posted 05-23-2000 07:35 PM       View Profile for Crystal Lynn   Email Crystal Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystal Lynn

whoa...beautiful poem...ive been there..and you just put it in words...needless to say i loved every min. of it    good luck in what ever you do decide
Sven
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4 posted 05-23-2000 11:32 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

It's a crap shoot isn't it my friend?  Well, just listen to your heart, and you'll know the answer. . .

Welcome to Passions. . . I hope that you'll stay with us for a while. . . excellent poem!

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insect
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5 posted 05-24-2000 12:38 AM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

Very beautiful poem!
Welcome to Passions
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 05-24-2000 12:45 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

SvtCobra~
Welcome to our family of Passionate poets.
With the passion shown in your poem ...
you'll like it here.
~*Marge*~



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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...


7 posted 05-24-2000 01:08 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Firstly, welcome! Secondly, wow, great work. You have summed up my current feeligs exactly.

 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


Irie
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since 12-01-1999
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8 posted 05-24-2000 02:02 AM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

If I didn't know better, I'd say I knew who you are.
What a powerful way to come into the Passions Family.
Welcome svtcobra  
MysticalNights
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since 05-17-2000
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9 posted 05-24-2000 09:39 AM       View Profile for MysticalNights   Email MysticalNights   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MysticalNights

Great poem!  Know those feelings all to well...
Poet deVine
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10 posted 05-24-2000 09:50 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special welcome.  
Rocketman
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11 posted 05-24-2000 11:13 AM       View Profile for Rocketman   Email Rocketman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rocketman

It is definately tough to be in that situation.  Thank you for writing from your heart.

Corazon
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12 posted 05-24-2000 11:19 AM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

will echo the above....tough situation, but you wrote your heart beautifully   welcome
Corinne
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13 posted 05-24-2000 11:20 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Welcome to Passions!

Corinne
Sudhir Iyer
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since 04-26-2000
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium


14 posted 05-24-2000 01:55 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Exquisite start here...svtcobra,

WELCOME TO PASSIONS !!!

Regards, sudhir.

 Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.
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