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falling for someone with a significant other
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falling for someone with a significant other |
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svtcobra Junior Member
since 2000-05-23
Posts 14Syracuse,NY USA |
I want to be there for you whenever you're in need I want to hold you and not have to let you go I want to tell the world of the beauty I have found I want to have the chance to be all you deserve A glance, a fragerance, a connection and those enchanting eyes The need to move forward is eminent the road ahead blurred Do I follow the heart and open up to the chance of being hurt Do I follow my head, move on and deny the heart its emotion Do I dream of you only night and day Do I truly want all of you more than words can say |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
What a wonderful description of love and true dedication. I think you should follow your heart. Thank you for sharing your poetry. I look forward to reading more. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome to Passions, svtcobra! Oh, the dark hidden passions of the heart beating for one that is taken. Great Poem, shows the pain and indecision. ~netswan |
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Crystal Lynn Junior Member
since 2000-05-21
Posts 18Miami, FL. USA |
whoa...beautiful poem...ive been there..and you just put it in words...needless to say i loved every min. of it  good luck in what ever you do decide |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
It's a crap shoot isn't it my friend? Well, just listen to your heart, and you'll know the answer. . . Welcome to Passions. . . I hope that you'll stay with us for a while. . . excellent poem! ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Very beautiful poem! Welcome to Passions |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SvtCobra~ Welcome to our family of Passionate poets. With the passion shown in your poem ... you'll like it here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Firstly, welcome! Secondly, wow, great work. You have summed up my current feeligs exactly. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
If I didn't know better, I'd say I knew who you are. What a powerful way to come into the Passions Family. Welcome svtcobra |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Great poem! Know those feelings all to well... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special welcome.  |
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Rocketman New Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 6 |
It is definately tough to be in that situation. Thank you for writing from your heart. |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
will echo the above....tough situation, but you wrote your heart beautifully welcome |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Welcome to Passions! Corinne |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Exquisite start here...svtcobra, WELCOME TO PASSIONS !!! Regards, sudhir. Life is like a painting, That in an art gallery is left hanging, Though many come just to look at it, A very few actually come to enjoy it. |
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