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Sunset (Companion to Dawn)
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Sunset (Companion to Dawn) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Sunset Last light New night begins Delicate promise of flight Moon Shines through Rays of crystal Showering with diamonds you Kiss Finding lips Hands find skin Under soft warm fingertips Passion Love's wonder Falling deep down Your spell I'm under -------------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is a wonderful following to Dawn. I particuarly like the third stanza, it is very sensual. Another lovely piece. Marina |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
I agree....this was so beautiful, like a soft sigh of pleasure. Wonderful.  Christina =^..^= |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Sven - this is lovely - so back to the top it goes! ~netswan |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This one is way to good and needs to be at the top......where all Kings sit. Espsecially the King of romance! Marina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you so much. . . Marina, glad that you liked it. . . you liked it twice, but I've told you. . . I'm not the king! LOL bobbycat, thank you. . . glad that you liked. . . netswan, thanks for the boost. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Sven~ That was a wonderful poem! I missed it when you posted..  But I found it now! Wonderful job."Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
A perfect companion to Dawn, I enjoyed both poems equally. Fantastic. ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Sven...me too! All the above comments. Wonderful. jwesley |
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