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Sunset (Companion to Dawn)

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Sven
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0 posted 05-23-2000 12:26 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

Sunset
Last light
New night begins
Delicate promise of flight

Moon
Shines through
Rays of crystal
Showering with diamonds you

Kiss
Finding lips
Hands find skin
Under soft warm fingertips

Passion
Love's wonder
Falling deep down
Your spell I'm under

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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Marina
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1 posted 05-23-2000 12:39 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

This is a wonderful following to Dawn. I particuarly like the third stanza, it is very sensual.  Another lovely piece.

Marina
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2 posted 05-23-2000 01:36 AM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

I agree....this was so beautiful, like a soft sigh of pleasure.  Wonderful.  

Christina =^..^=
netswan
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Sven - this is lovely - so back to the top
it goes!

~netswan
Marina
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4 posted 05-23-2000 08:30 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

This one is way to good and needs to be at the top......where all Kings sit.  Espsecially the King of romance!

Marina
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5 posted 05-23-2000 11:08 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you so much. . .

Marina, glad that you liked it. . . you liked it twice, but I've told you. . . I'm not the king!  LOL

bobbycat, thank you. . . glad that you liked. . .

netswan, thanks for the boost. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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6 posted 05-24-2000 04:41 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

Sven~

That was a wonderful poem!  I missed it when you posted..    But I found it now!  Wonderful job.



 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
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A perfect companion to Dawn, I enjoyed both poems equally. Fantastic.  

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"Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "
Douglas Adams.

"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto


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8 posted 05-24-2000 06:20 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Sven...me too! All the above comments.  Wonderful.


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