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Ranting and Raving

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Ardonida
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since 05-18-2000
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0 posted 05-23-2000 12:24 AM       View Profile for Ardonida   Email Ardonida   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ardonida

I look around me, and I find that I do not see.
Nothing, nothing here is important to me.
I see the faces, and I see the smiles,
but none of that ever reach the eyes.
I listen to the words, but I do not hear.
I do not even think that I care.
I have had enough, I don't care to fight.
I walk about, but still no sight.
I once thought that I had an eternal fire,
but soon this place drained all desire.
There is not a bad person in the rest of this world.
They all are here, together in this place they were hurled.
I have had enough, I do not care anymore,
And in my heart there is hurt, but it aint sore.
I have had enough of this hipocritick sh*t.
And in their faces I wish to spit.
Now go away, or you can stay.
For I dont care, I cannot see anyway!!
adri

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Angelwings
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1 posted 05-23-2000 12:44 AM       View Profile for Angelwings   Email Angelwings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angelwings

Wow!  I totally understand where you are coming from.  You demonstrated such confusion rushing around.  Thanx for sharing your poetry.
 
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